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About dang time!
4062178 yeah, another reason it wouldn't work.
4062535 yeah sorry about that.
4062149 no biggie, you were spot on for the most part. The Silent Hill scene was something I made up. Was going to use a pyramid head appearance but he wasn't until the second one, and I referenced the first.
..If we don't find out, you are going to be MURDERED. by Pinkamena.
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*looks at HumanSVD in the eyes* Tell me the truth!
4062610 you'll see in the next update. And I'm not Gabe newell, you'll get it before he comes out.
4062587 no I won't lol
4062599 could be ruby
4062653 you got your answers though.
4062657 Yeah, just wish I didn't have to end up pulling out my hair in frustration to get them.
4062657 So your alive
4062826 refer to Nightmare knight's comment below.
4062955 you sure? A special announcement will be made after the end of the story.
HE BETTER PICK LUNA OR ELSE HES GOING TO END UP LIKE THIS GUY
GO TEAM LUNA!
TEAM RUBY FTW! KACHAI!
Team Luna!
GO LUNA
He had better pick Ruby, she needs at least one good outcome in her short before she was cursed life.
Luna or *BLAM!*.
I feel it is an easy choice. The creepy stalker ghost-thing whom he hasn't really had romantic moments with (awkward or freaky, but not truly relationship worthy) or the cute princesses he has had many sweet moments with (whose relationship with him is pretty well fleshed out).
In all honesty, I never got why Ruby was an interest in the first place. It was basically a well written Luna X Human fic (very well written) with Applebloom as their pseudo-adoptive daughter and then Ruby was thrown in there as a severe case of the third wheel. Look at it this way. If you remove Luna, the story becomes a garbled mess of bull and wtf-ness. Remove Ruby and no one can really tell a difference (the only really noticeable difference that would cause is a lack of knowing what caused the curse). Make Konrad and Luna a couple and it is like building upon what you have already been building up throughout the fic. Make Konrad and Ruby a couple and it becomes a major case of whiplash in a "wait, what?" kind of way.
I think my above "vote" has more credence, given I didn't just spout one side or the other. I gave actuall reasons for it beyond "I feel sorry for Ruby" or "Luna is best pony". Ruby and Konrad together just feels like driving over a pothole while Konrad and Luna together feels like driving over new pavement. It just fits with how you have developed your story.
4065541 If you went back and read a few chapters, Konrad an Ruby did have some bonding moments. Perhaps my main flaw with this story was that I didn't flesh out the portion of Ruby x Konrad very well. I did show why Ruby liked him and that she liked Humans due to the stories Mitta read to her. And after suffering like that for years and seeing a seemingly strong human from her fantasy stories as a kid will make you giddy.
Take that and how he interacted with Apple Bloom made Ruby want him even more. He also pointed out how he was able to work with her and relate to her a bit better. That and she always stood by him which means a lot to Konrad.
4062635 They are going to find out alright, question is how will Luna and Apple Bloom react when they find out.
4065541
...I'm curious, but did you even READ the last couple chapters? Because in those chapters Ruby basically became a great love interest. Luna? No. Not at all, due to her REACTION TO OUR MAIN CHARACTER DISAPPEARING DUE TO CERTAIN ELEMENTS OF HARMONY. Yes, it was set up for Luna at first, but it bonded Ruby and Konrad together extremely well as it began to finish up. If this ends with Luna....I will say I'm disappointed, due to the fact it felt as if Luna didn't care much towards the end, but Ruby loved Konrad with all her heart. So, my final choice through what our friendly author wrote, I would say Ruby, because she gave it all.
4066023 to be fair Luna doesn't know what they did to him yet. When she does though.......
4066023
Put against all the rest of the fic. A few moments compared to many instances between Konrad and Luna. I personally feel that a lot of effort has gone into putting Luna and Konrad together. That is what this fic seems to me. I'm even re-reading the story and paying explicite attention to LunaXKonrad and RubyXKonrad moments. Until pretty recent chapters, Ruby didn't have much romantic development.
Yes, it was set up for Luna at first and did a very good job of it. As it got to the end, it then did a good job of bonding Ruby and Konrad. However, from the beginning, through the middle, and any time they were not physically separated, the fic continued to further develop the relationship between Luna and Konrad.
It's like taking two people. One has known you for a long time and you have, over time, built up a very close relationship with one another. Lets say, over the course of a year. Then, a second person comes along and, after a while, also builds a relationship with you in a month. During this month, you also have continued working on your relationship with the first person. Sometimes you cannot see each other, but only sometimes. Who are you closer to?
Your opinion is fine, and I have mine.
4065947 .
It had the same effect on Luna (before Ruby joined the group). So that cannot be considered a plus to just Ruby.
In the chapter prior to the announcement (the most recent actual chapter, basically), he commented that he didn't relate to Luna as well because of the class difference. He then was informed that Luna didn't care about the class thing and he took that to heart.
So what does that make Luna? Does that mean that all the times she stood by him doesn't count but the times Ruby has done it does?
This is just how I feel about it.
You had BETTER GIVE US THE NEXT CRUCIAL CHAPTER SOON! I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY TOO LONG FOR YOU TO SMASH ME IN THE FACE WITH ANOTHER CLIFFHAMMER! BURN YOUR LIFE AND DO NOTHING BUT WRITE THIS UNTIL ITS DONE.
ALSO CHOOSE LUNA
I would hope so.....................
Patience is my friend.
boredome is my foe.
wasting time is my life.
exitement is life.
thats how i am feeling right now thought something negative might happen but with you, you make really long appropiate breaks for the length of your stories.
Can't wait.
Oh one more thing...
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RUBY FOR THE WIN
4071590 errr, it's that am emoticon mooning me?
4072630
nope its a dog. :p
failed dog.
4066773
When she does:
4081308 Gah, I'll fix that later.
4081389 Going to have fun writing that one, I hippie I can get the outrage meter to max.
4081585
... we kinda zapped Konrad and Ruby with the Elements of Harmony
... since we didn't trust them
, and we don't know where they vanished to
.. neither do we know if we can get them back somehow
,
"
Mane 6 & Celestia: "...Well sister you see
Oh I'm so so sorry princess
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....
~5 minutes later~
Princess Luna goes apeshit on everyone!
>THE END< // literally cuz she isn't gonna let any sister or Element (except pinkie maybe) exist any further.
Sorry Applebloom
!
Bye-Bye Applejack~!
EDIT: Thus, Super Alicorn Nightmare Moon Perfect Form was born, and she brought the Reign of Terror over Equestria. To this day it is said she keeps the Mane 6 (except pinkie) and Celestia in an eternal 'tsukuyomi' (Thanks to the mutation of her left eye into a Mangekyō Sharingan after the 'Lunatic Breakdown Incident). The torment they are put through in this 'illusionary prison' is said to be insane.
The bearers of the Elements and Celestia are currently held under strict lockdown in the newly build 'Impel Down' on level 6.
Had you chosen by yourself or you take the votes of comments??????
4087195 Not answering that, you'll see soon enough.
4081649 You will see what happens....
Holy fuck Konrad drank a lot of mead... I drank 3/4 of a 700ml bottle of Bourbone Kentucky Straight Whiskey last night and I can't remember anything after 9 PM all the way till I woke up at 7 AM the next morning.
Reading your crazy ass shit always inspires me to go back and tweak my own stuff in GDocs... might get around to finishing it sometime soon if work permits.
Also I gotta show you my AK-74 DMR I built, she's sexy as shit!
4090462 Yeah, he did drink a lot. I know I can binge drink beer pretty well. Did it back in 2011 when I drank 13 beers of various different countries with varying volume levels. Puked on my bed and flipped it over to deal with it tomorrow, woke up 9 hours later and realized I was still drunk.....
And 74 DMR? Get out of here, enough of your lies! I should show you guys my collection, I already have 3200 5.45 rounds for my 74 alone and my dragunov just got another scope. Got 5 scopes so far, 3 Belmo and 2 NPZ with one being a functional NVG!
4092001
Yeah, I was wasted but for some reason I never have a hang over or get a headache or anything, lol I woke up and walked outside and looked up and was like "What a lovely day, sun shining bright, the air so crisp and fresh... time to go back in and play BF4 for 12 hours straight (to which I failed anyway cos I had to clean the house at some point) But not remembering the night really scares me haha, I'm still finding weird random shit I posted at like 1 AM.
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I'm a filthy casual with my western scope :P But here she is... my beauty... now if only I could get a firearms license and convince the government to allow me to have her here in Australia :c
4092964 Looks like an AKM to me, who made it? Is it romanian? And where is the rifle itself?
4094464 *giggles* surprised you didn't catch on quicker, it's actually an Airsoft AEG, It's meant to be styled like an AK74 according to the manufacturer, but is just referred to as an AK. I'd never be allowed to own an actual Kalash in Australia :( but I may be able to get this across here if I fill in the right forms and get a license beforehoof, y'know?
I spent FOREVER hunting down the gas tube rail, there's also a handguard rail but I decided I'd prefer the timber furniture. Originally I was going to get a hold of a PK-A scope but they're REALLY expensive... atleast for an AEG kit.
One day I hope to live in America and atleast get to use my AEG outside of visits.
Two things, make moar chapters, and GO TEAM RUBY.
4144223 thanks for telling me too little to late ruby just pushed me down the stairs ,ouch
4144223
Thanks.
Three things. First, moar chapters. Second, GO TEAM RUBY! Third, Bring in more violence; this whole sitting-around-learning thing is getting somewhat stale. You should definitely put in some form of redemption for Konrad if he choses the correct Ruby Route (trademarked.)
4150540 wow hard core team ruby fan huh? My ruby plus hie will be pleased to hear that. All I have to tell you that the next chapter will be the last. And I will tell you that Ruby will be at peace no matter what.
4162755 Better not be resting in peace, otherwise there'll be hell to pay.
But seriously upload the chapter and GO TEAM RUBY.
4162755 Also if you end up making a sequel or whatever, make sure its more violent. Like headshots through the roof and knee-cappings through the floor. Heck, just continue the story and Cthulu will be proud.
Wait...didn't you say that you killed off ruby in the last chapter. I'm now really confused.
Finally. *wheez*
After one week of constant chapter munching I caught up to the story.
Now first of all, this story is really nice and I enjoy it very much.
Your characters are good and believable and the flow is good too.
Now to the more unpleasant things.
As I read through it I noticed a large number of mistakes like, misspelling words, double timing them like in the famous 'the the', or completely leaving out some.
I could puzzle out what should've been there, but it was a bit annoying nonetheless.
But these can be corrected or not. So whatever.
And finally my very own opinion on the Ruby/Luna dilemma.
Since Konrad seems to be torn between both of them and has difficulties of choosing one of them, my best bet would be another paragon symbol and the possibility to talk to both of them one last time.
He'd explain why he cannot choose between them and for this matter would give up on both of them because he can't stand to make one of them sad. Sure he'd make them sad with his decision, but as they see that it is impossible for him to set any preferations they'll stay with him for some final moments, before he goes his own way without any of them. His heart might be broken, but he'd go on, knowing that this was the best way to solve this.
My opinion.
Dragon
Raptor Jesus... Raptor Jesus everwhere
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