Dinky Doo accidently damages Twilight Sparkle's library home with her magic. Intrigued, Twilight takes her in as her student... but Dinky gets more attention than she initially expected.
“I... I’m s-so sorry! I didn’t mean to do that, Ms… uh?”—
—“Twilight Sparkle,” she answered flatly. At this point I couldn’t help myself, but to shed a few tears as I stammered my apology.
“I live with my step mom, Derpy Hooves and have an older step sister, Amethyst Star who lives on her own, and uh,” I scratched my chin, trying to come up with something else.—
—“I’m apparently gifted with magic, and uh, oh yeah I love to goof off and just go crazy around town with other ponies, like playing pranks and what not… assuming they can tolerate me at least. I usually end up going too far and my stupid magic hurts some pony or breaks something expensive. My mom has had to cover for me to cover the damages more times than I can count! I always end up losing my short term friendships because of it,” I finished on a somber note dropping my head down towards my hooves.
“Uh… yeah that does seem to be a little tiny bit of a problem you have there, Dinky,” remarked Twilight giving a sympathetic chuckle. “It seems we definitely have a bit of work to do.”—
—“With you at my side, I won’t fail!” I exclaimed excitedly.
Looks promising. Saw the cover on Derbiborrou
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same here