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Nice! Surrised that you did a story based on that picture/animation
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The idea came to me and I rolled with it. :)
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And you did well!
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You are... My Fire
"Number 2 keep it going."
The one desire.
"Number 3"
Believe, when I say.
"Number 4!"
I want it that way.
"TELL ME WHY!"
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AIN'T NUTHIN' BUT A MISTAKE
tell me why
I NEVER WANT TO HEAR YOU SAY...
I WANT IT THAT WAY!
"After he composted himself" - oh, that's just too mulch! :P What a great typo for "composed himself".
Sweetie Belle: Are we going to dance again?
Spike: Yeah, the dance with no pants.
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now i have to hear that song, you evil
Nice. You should color more Tricksta (no relation) art.
Is Sweetie pregnant now?
True love never gets old.
Most excellent.
R.I.P Apron
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This was interesting I hope she bring in the other CMC and fillies to be Spikes. I think him going to the club and all the girls getting a go with him would be epic. I can so SO see these three in a herd for sure.
A little rushed in places but good for a one-shot.
Finally, someone who enjoys the concept of heat as much as me!
This looks very good, but I will put this on the read later for now. It's currently 1am and i need sleep
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lol, whoops. Good spot. Thanks! *fixed*
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Well, it is tempting, I mean I really like how the edit came out. But I've got other art pieces I'd like to do first :)
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I'll leave that up to you and the other readers :) Maybe it took or maybe they are incompatible? How would you like it for yourself? :)
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That would be a fun little romp in the orchard, no doubt. ;) And yeah the three in a herd would be fun, if not exhausting for the poor dragon, haha.
I decided to start reading this at about 1 AM.
I should have just hit Read Later. Now it's 2:30, and I'm tired AND turned on.
And I don't have a cute little cuddledragon like Sweetie does! I'm very jealous.
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I'm sorry. We could all use a snuggle buddy at times :)
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That is such an awesome song. Now it is stuck in my head. :)
And that is when AB and Scotaloo reveal to have the same problem and SB, being the friend she is, lets them borrow Spike, ending the day in a big foursome!
Nicely put together story. Your really did well with characterization for Sweetie, Spike, and Rarity.
Really enjoyed Spike's reaction to Rarity's response to him, and his internal thoughts on the matter.
Sweetie Bell's, and Spikes reaction really felt like it was their first time. Poor Sweetie really suffered for the initial entry.
Loved the classic Rarity reaction at the end with Spike and Sweetie ignoring her, and leaving Rarity behind.
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Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it :)
Maybe a bonus chapter with AB and Scootaloo joining Spike and Sweetie Belle as part of the Youngest Harem.
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Lol, I'll think about it, but 3 girls 1 colt has been done a lot and I feel it wouldn't add anything but sex :P
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Could make a good idea for a sequel.
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lol, there seems to be a desire for a sequel from people XD Maybe if the wind blows that way, but I have three other stories to work on first. :P
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You could always add a couple more colts, and have Spike teach them how to do things. Ya know, AB & Scoot need relief too, they look for some friends, come across Rumble or Tender or some such, sex Ed taught by professor Spike ensues lol.
But it seems you have other stuff on your table regardless.
Good job! Though, is it still foalcon with her in heat. Maybe slight foalcon.
This is adorable.
Although reading the subtext Rarity seems like she treats Spike as a slave which is... concerning.
Still, loved it. Spike romance is very either or in quality so it's nice to see one that works well.
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lol, having spike teaching other colts how to please a filly? Yeah, i can only see this going well XD
This was so sweet I love this ship way more.
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Lol probably not. But I can totally see him preening himself as some sex master to impress his friends. He'd totally get in over his head as usual, but things always work out for Spike in the end. Right?
*Sweetiebelle slowly turns toward Spike and says in a slightly deeper, and somewhat growling voice* "It makes me want to make babies!"
Spike's thingie *chuckles* "I'm in danger."
first excellent story and would like to see a sequel if one is made but, I don't wat to follow as this is the only story of your stories to grab my attention (sorry had to be honest ) advice?
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Who's to say the Heat Buster doesn't stop with 3?
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :) And yeah, Rarity has been having Spike act like his personal slave since season one anyway, lol.
I mean, remember that time she made him take out her garbage and then he stank of her garbage and she told him to go home and pushed him away? :P
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Absolutely. I can imagine Spike bragging about it to Big Mac and Discord, with Big Mac taking vapid interest while Discord is... Discord about it. XD Then it ends with... Oh no. My brain! XD I just pictured Big Mac and Spike having to teach Discord about how to make love to a pony cause he doesn't know what sex is XD
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Spike teaches sex ed to all the fillies and colts in the school. One at a time. XD
welp I guess that means sweetie is pregnant now. I mean their first time unprotected while she is in estrus. and with his instincts acting the way they are then their biology might just be compatible
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Why need any other colts? I believe our Spike can take down all three by himself alone!
the writing just eewww incoherent this needs tore down and started over.
a editor is needed.
Wait until Spike realize that you can actually have a herd and looks at the two other Cutie Mark Crusaders.
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Well we do know that Spike has high endurance for working hard. I'm sure he could take care of them as well as given them an equal share of love. But that's not for this story. :P
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Why call it pedophilia if you can call it what it is : beastiality
See das how stupid you sound. This is a classic case of dont like dont read . I can juat imagine how fucking excited you were when you saw a foalcon story . Yes i can finally post a comment thats been made hundreds of times before that noone gives a shit about anyway because its in the fucking tags . I can just fucking imagine you posting this comment and just fucking cumming in your pants because this is the only enjoyment that you get out of life.
So fuck off
If you dont like it go away
Simple as that
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two teenagers = pedophilia?
Since when and in what reality?
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Found the pedo
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An editor is also needed for your comment, both grammar and content wise.
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no i was trying to make a point.
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lol, while I appreciate the idea that Rarity set them both up, I think you missed something :P Rarity didn't know Sweetie was in heat. When Sweetie told her she was in heat, Rarity wasn't paying attention to her and just assumed she was talking about being unwell. :P
Her story was just wonderful, featuring lots of sweetness and fun!
You were able to capture very well all the nuances and particularities of the original personalities of each character involved.
I would very much appreciate reading your version of what it would be like to deepen the relationship between Discord and Fluttershy, with the discovery of love, sexual intercourse and a possible pregnancy.
I just couldn't swallow the wreck armed by the producers of the "MLP: FIM" series, where Discord tells Spike that he is not in love with the sweetest mare in all Equestria, that their relationship is purely platonic... 💔
That was unforgivable!!!
PS .: I'm a big fan of the 4th generation of MLP, but unfortunately I don't speak English. Here in Brazil the language is Brazilian Portuguese. Thanks to the help of the Google Translate website, I am able to read the wonderful stories, and even true epics, in great detail, created by other fans who share my tastes. And, at least here at FIM Fiction, not everything is always flowers and jelly beans, in the end the good can even overcome the evil, but until then the path can be quite thorny and bitter...
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Thank you for the praise. :)
I dunno if I'd ever do a discord x fluttershy story sadly, but a seed has been planted and I'll think about it, but probably wouldn't happen, sorry.