Down the long hallway, the motley group of winners and ponies (And Spike), led by Mr. Willy Wonka himself, eventually come upon a large room at the end. They were all excited to get the tour underway, to see what wonderful surprises awaited them. But first, Mr. Wonka mentions there was something that ‘needed to be taken care of first’. None in the group had a clue what he meant, but they were willing to see what it was. As they approached the center of the room, Mr. Wonka gestures to the wall on their right.
“Now: hats, coats, galoshes, over here,” Mr. Wonka instructs. “But hurry please, we have so much time and so little to see.”
Suddenly, he stops for a brief moment, realizing what he just said. He turns back to the group, causing them to pause.
“Wait a minute! Strike that. Reverse it. Thank you.”
Everyone in the group was confused by Mr. Wonka’s choice of words; nevertheless, they proceed with removing their coats and other accessories (Mostly the humans).
“I don’t think we’re going to be able to remove our coats,” Pinkie joked.
“It’s part of our being, Pinkie,” Rainbow rolled her eyes.
“Well then, how am I able to do this?” Cheese gasped.
Every pony turned and gasps, their eyes growing wide. Cheese Sandwich stood before them, holding his fur coat in his hooves (His buttoned shirt on the coat too). They could see his body was completely hairless, even his own mane was gone. Every pony covered their eyes from the display, Fluttershy herself hiding her face completely in her mane.
“Oh dear Celestia, Cheese!” Rarity exclaimed. “Please put your coat back on!”
“But Mr. Wonka told us to put our coats over here,” Cheese responded.
“He told THEM to put their coats over there, Cheese,” Twilight explained, motioning to the kids and their parents. “We’re ponies, we ‘literally’ can’t take our coats off.”
“Not so hard for me,” Cheese replies, brushing his coat.
“How in tarnation did ya even take it off?” Applejack asked, realizing. “No, wait a minute…”
“Well… Since you asked, actually it’s really simple. You see, I just…”
“That was a rhetorical question!” Spike interrupts, quickly.
“P-P-Please put your coat back on,” Fluttershy squeaked.
“All right, all right,” Cheese Sandwich replies. “So picky…”
Cheese quickly put his coat back on. He sticks his hooves between the holes for his legs, then sticks his arms through the holes like putting on a jacket. He lifts the top with his brown mane over his head similar to a hoodie, and to top it off, he literally zips his ‘coat’ from the bottom to the top as the zipper mysteriously disappears. As he adjusts the collar of his banana shirt, every pony uncovered their eyes stunned by how it seemed to mold back into his being. They all had questions as to ‘how’ he pulled it off, but probably best not to ask.
I mean we’re not supposed to ever ask ‘Pinkie Pie’ how she does things, why should Cheese be any different?
Urgh... I am never going to get that image out of my head!
“When do I get my chocolate?” Violet asked.
“First take off your coat, Violet,” Mr. Beauregarde responds.
“Boy, what weird looking coat hangers,” Mike remarked.
True to his word, the coat hangers were a rather odd sight. They resembled actual hands waiting to take their coats. Strangely enough, as the guests put their coats on the hangers, the hands clamp down ‘literally’ holding onto them, grasping them tightly. The people gasp in fright, jumping back.
“Little surprises around every corner, but nothing dangerous,” Mr. Wonka assured. “Don’t be alarmed. And as soon as your outer vestments are in hand, we’ll begin.”
Everyone stepped to the center, as one of the hands grabs Grandpa Joe’s hat off his hat, holding it tightly. Grandpa Joe stopped mid-stride, turning back toward the hangar holding his hat. But he shakes his head and continues.
“Now, will the children kindly step up here?” Mr. Wonka instructs.
The children approach Mr. Wonka, as he grabs ahold of a rope hanging from the ceiling and pulls. A large drape is pulled back revealing a rather large looking parchment with wording that appears to get smaller the farther it went until hardly anyone could read anything.
“Um… Just how in pony feathers is any pony supposed to read that?” Rainbow asked, confused.
“I’ve read my fair share of scrolls before,” Twilight said, squinting her eyes. “But never anything with writing this small.”
“Floods, fire, frost, or frippery?” Mr. Salt mumbled, confused.
“Accidents?” Mike asked. “What kind of accidents?”
“I didn’t know we’d have to sign anything for this tour,” Mrs. Teevee stated.
“I can’t see what it says on the bottom,” Violet said.
“Join the club, we have jackets!” Spike joked.
Twilight nudged the little dragon along the shoulder, shaking her head with a disapproving frown. Spike sheepishly chuckles, backing away from her gaze and quietly hopping onto her back.
“Violet, you first,” Mr. Wonka instructed. “Sign here.”
Violet approaches Mr. Wonka, taking one of the quills and prepared to sign her name. Just then, her father runs up to her.
“Hold it! Lemme through here, you kids. Violet, baby, don’t you sign anything there. What’s this all about?”
“Standard form of contract,” Mr. Wonka explained, casually.
“Don’t talk to me about contracts, Wonka,” Mr. Beauregarde argued. “I use ‘em myself, they’re strictly for suckers.”
“Yes, but you wouldn’t begrudge me a little protection. Not a drop.”
“You know that’s actually a good point,” Twilight deduced.
“Never a bad thing to wish to be protected, now is it darling?” Rarity added.
“I don’t sign anything without my lawyer,” Mr. Beauregarde shook his head.
“My Veruca don’t sign anything either,” Mr. Salt butted in.
“Then she don’t go in,” Mr. Wonka responded. “I’m sorry, rules of the house.”
“I want to go in and don’t you dare stop me!” Veruca glared, toward her father.
“I’m only trying to help you sweetheart.”
Veruca pushes her father away, snatching the quill from Violet’s hands.
“Give me that pen! You’re always making things difficult!”
Every pony was appalled by her actions toward her father, as well as the others.
“My, such rude display,” Rarity huffed. “Especially to one’s own father!”
“Boy ah tell yah, if my pa was still around, he’d whip me round the bend if’n I said anythin’ like that tah him,” Applejack remarked.
Mr. Wonka, meanwhile, seemed quite entertained with the display.
“Nicely handled, Veruca,” He complimented. “She’s a girl who knows where she’s going.”
“It ain’t no place good,” Spike mumbled.
Violet grabs another quill, proceeding to sign her name as well.
“Wait a minute, what’s all that small print there at the bottom?” Mr. Beauregarde asked, pointing out.
“Oh, if you have any problems, dial information, thank you for calling,” Mr. Wonka answered. “Mike? Augustus?”
After Veruca and Violet place their quills back in the ink, Mike and Augustus grabs them and starts signing.
“I assume there’s an accident indemnity clause,” Mrs. Teevee asked.
“Never between friends,” Mr. Wonka replied.
“Saw this in a movie once,” Mike said. “Guy signed his wife’s insurance policy. Then he bumped her off.”
“Okay, that’s just wrong in every possible way,” Rainbow said.
“What about me, Grandpa?” Charlie asked.
“Sign away, Charlie,” Grandpa Joe answered. “We got nothing to lose.”
“Just be careful, Charlie,” Twilight informed.
“You never know what you could be getting yourself into,” Fluttershy added.
“Sure he does,” Pinkie smiled, assuring. “It’s a lifetime supply of chocolate. I don’t know any pony who wouldn’t want to sign up for that.”
“Let’s go in!” Veruca groans, impatiently. “Come on!”
“Patience, patience, little dear,” Mr. Wonka said. “Everything has to be in order. Everyone’s signed? Yes. Good. On we go!”
They follow Mr. Wonka down another tiny hallway, coming upon an ornate door with a combination lock. Mr. Wonka proceeds to turn the combination to open the lock.
“Ninety-nine… Forty-Four… One hundred percent pure.”
He pushes the door wide open to a room, its walls and floors having a striped pattern.
“Just through the other door please,” He instructed.
The entire group wanders into the room, only to discover there was no other door at all. The entire area is so small, they crapped up rather quickly everyone and every pony pressed against each other.
“Uh, Wonka, there’s some mistake here…” Mr. Salt groaned.
“There is no other door!” Fluttershy squeaked.
“There’s no way out!” Veruca yelled.
“Well I know there’s a door here someplace,” Mr. Wonka replied, looking around.
“Oh no!” Rarity whined. “My mane will get crumpled, and my precious coat will be tattered!”
“Honestly, Rarity!” Applejack groaned.
“I don’t like this, Wonka!” Mr. Beauregarde complained. “I don’t like it at all!”
“I haven’t felt this cramped since before I was hatched!” Spike wheezed.
“Is this a trick or something, Wonka?” Mr. Salt asked, angrily.
“Help!” Mr. Gloop cried. “Mr. Wonka, help! I’m getting squashed! Save me!”
“Is it my soul that calls upon my name?” Mr. Wonka asked, slapping the walls.
“Let me out or I’ll scream!” Veruca yelled.
“PLEASE let her out!” The ponies shout, in unison.
Amidst the mass of confusion, Rainbow Dash and Applejack were so cramped they were practically pressed against one another, their lips mere inches away. They tried desperately to push themselves as far from each other as possible, but it was becoming increasingly difficult.
“Now look, here Wonka…” Mr. Salt began.
“Excuse me, question time will come at the end of the session,” Mr. Wonka informed. “We must press on. Come along… Come along… Ah, here we are.”
Everyone turns over to where the door was, only to see Mr. Wonka referring to the very same door they just entered.
“Oh, don’t be a darn fool, Wonka!” Mr. Beauregarde said. “That’s the way we came in!”
“It is?” Mr. Wonka asked. “Are you sure?”
“We’ve just come through there,” Mr. Salt confirmed.
“If all we’re going to do is exit from the same place we entered, what was the purpose of this?” Twilight questioned.
“Huh. How do you like that?”
Mr. Wonka leans against the door and it flew open, revealing a completely different area. Now they were staring at a long hallway with doors lining both sides all the way to the end. Everyone gasped, questioning how this was possible… If not ‘probable’.
“There we are…” Mr. Wonka smiled.
“I don’t understand!” Rarity spoke, confused. “That wasn’t there before.”
“It defies all laws of nature!” Twilight added, befuddled.
“What is this, Wonka?” Mr. Salt questioned. “Some kind of fun house?”
“Why, having fun?” Mr. Wonka asked.
Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich, despite being squished between the group, nodded enthusiastically.
“Yes sir, Mr. Wonka sir!” Pinkie smiled.
“I’ve had enough!” Mrs. Teevee declared. “I’m not going in there.”
“Come on, Violet, we’re getting out of here,” Mr. Beauregarde concluded.
“Oh, you can’t get out backwards,” Mr. Wonka informed them. “You’ve gotta go forwards to go back. Better press on.”
Wonka walks down the hall, the rest of the group following close behind. As they walked, they noticed something very peculiar. Strolling down the hallway, the walls appeared to get shorter as it goes on.
“Hey, the room is getting smaller!” Charlie exclaimed, shocked.
“No, it’s not!” Mrs. Teevee responded. “He’s getting bigger.”
“Boy ah tell you what, this has to be one ah the strangest things that ever happened to us!” Applejack declared, bewildered.
“Where’s the chocolate?” Cheese asked.
“I doubt if there is any,” Mr. Beauregarde answered.
“I doubt if any of us will get out of here alive,” Mr. Salt added, nervously.
“Oh, you should never, never doubt what nobody is sure about,” Mr. Wonka said.
“You’re not squeezing me through that tiny door,” Mrs. Gloop shook her head.
“You’re off your bleeding nut, Wonka,” Mr. Salt added. “No one can get through there.”
“My dear friends, you are now about to enter the nerve center of the entire Wonka Factory,” Mr. Wonka smiled brightly. “Inside this room, an important room I might add, all of my dreams become realities… And some of my realities become dreams.”
“Mr. Wonka, why is the door so small?” Twilight asked.
“Why to keep all the great big chocolately flavor inside, my dear,” Mr. Wonka answered. “Wait till you see my meadow. Every blade of that grass is so delectable.”
“You can eat the grass?” Charlie asked.
“Of course you can. And almost ‘everything’ you will see is eatable… Edible… I mean, you can eat almost everything.”
“Let me in, I’m starving!” Augustus whines loudly.
“Now, don’t get overexcited!” Mr. Wonka said, calmly. “Don’t lose your head, Augustus! We wouldn’t want anyone to lose that… Yet. Now, the combination… This is a musical lock.”
He plays the opening to Mozart’s “Marriage of Figaro” on a tiny piano along the door.
“Rachmaninoff,” Mrs. Teevee smiled.
“Ladies and gentlemen… Boys and girls… Mares and stallions… The chocolate room.”
Mr. Wonka pushed the door open slowly, revealing to be a bigger door as even the wall opened up. Everyone slowly walked inside, shocked by the display before their eyes. The room was absolutely gigantic in size, littered with an entire assortment of candy they could ever imagine. Among many things, there were lollipop trees, candy toadstools, and a gigantic chocolate river with a chocolate waterfall. Everyone looked on in astonishment and pure bliss seeing such an amazing sight. Sniffling is head, as Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich both wiped tears from their eyes, never seeing anything so beautiful in their entire lives.
“T-There are no words,” Pinkie whimpered, happily. “N-No words!”
“It’s like something a poet would make!” Cheese sighed.
“It’s beautiful!” Twilight gasped.
“Oh yes,” Mr. Wonka nodded, kneeling down. “It’s very beautiful.”
Mr. Wonka placed an arm around both Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich, the two ponies smiling along with him.
“Hold your breath… Make a wish… Count to three…”
https://m.As Mr. Wonka led them all down the stairs, he swings his cane side to side, sometimes having the kids stop as it swung mere inches from them. He’d walk down the stairs, pause, then walk back up, then down, even walking while bending his knees. The group did their best to keep up, but Pinkie and Cheese were having fun. By the time they step off the last step, he bows to them all as if to say ‘enjoy’. Smiling, everyone ran off to enjoy the many wonders of the Chocolate Room.
Everyone breathed in the wonders of the chocolate room, enjoying every piece of candy imaginable. Charlie and Grandpa Joe shared two very large candy canes, while Twilight and Spike were enjoying some chocolate pudding mud puddle using some of the flower buds for cups. At one point, Spike notices Mike trying to reach for some candy high along the branches, far from his reach. Wonka casually taps the branch allowing the candy to clutter on the path, so he could enjoy himself.
“Heh, I thought you hated candy,” Spike replied, casually.
“I said I hate ‘chocolate’,” Mike replied, between chews. “I never said I hate ‘candy’.”
Meanwhile, as Violet chewed on a giant gummi bear brought down by Mr. Wonka, her father, Mr. Beauregarde, chewed on the longest liquorish rope he had ever seen. Veruca broke apart a candy pumpkin, sticking her hand inside and ate the gelatinous innards. Mrs. Teevee took a handful of the sugar on the candy toadstools, her face widening at the sweet taste as she scooped some more. As for Pinkie Pie, Cheese Sandwich, and Augustus Gloop, they ate just about everything that was in their path, even the grass which was actually sugar-coated. And all the while, Mr. Wonka danced merrily around, knocking aside the candy pumpkins out of his way. He stands before his guests, admiring the beauty and splendor of his own candy factory.
Eventually Mr. Wonka takes a seat along the ground, taking a teacup shaped flower bud. The teacup itself was already filled with edible nectar, which he sips like tea. We can see in his eyes how much he loves this place, every square inch of this room of his making… His masterpiece… His very livelihood. As the song concludes, Mr. Willy Wonka takes a big gulp of what remained in his little cup. When it was all empty, he studies the cup… Then takes a big bite along the side of the cup, chewing the revealed to be chocolate cup.
Hmm…
*Takes a cup from his desk, studies it a bit, then takes a chomp on the side… Immediately regretting it*
OH GOD!!!
*He races towards another area; the sound of rushing water is heard as he appears to spit out the chunks of the cup into a sink. Another voice calls out.*
Why would you take a bite out of a coffee cup?
I DON’T KNOW!!!
That was awesome and a beautiful musical number. I loved it when they were all cramped in the room. I liked it when Mike's mom cried "Somebody's touching me!" and it was Grandpa Joe who was holding onto her shoulder and the looks they exchanged was a crack up. Now I can't wait to see how the children start getting eliminated by their own greed.
Nice chapter double e!!!!
CHEESE! Not in front of the kids! (Looks out the TV screen)
Even now I still wish I was on that tour. I be good like Charlie and get to see all these things for myself
Language. I believe you meant to say "cramp?"
Hearing and watching this song being played as I read this all makes me miss Gene Wilder so much; he was an amazing actor and great comedian, not to mention quite a good singer.
Nice chapter
A World of PURE imagination indeed! A great musical number for the first part of this delectable tour! Keep it up!
And so, we finally get to the heart of the movie with the actual venture through the Chocolate Factory, the tour hosted by the rather eccentric, yet seemingly sweet as chocolate Mr. Willy Wonka (NOT using the personality he had from the remake). No sooner do they find themselves in the factory does everyone realize they are completely out of their element, with all the unusual stuff happening before they even enter the actual factory. Signing a contract disclosing some provisos they do not know about, coat-hangers that 'literally' take their coats, a cramped room that somehow switches areas, and even the fact that going up a hallway it gives the illusion the room is getting smaller or they are getting taller.
But all of it is worth it once they get to the 'Chocolate Room' where every candy, aside from chocolate, is featured prominently. It's a beautiful place, filled with all the treats they can eat... At least to offer a false sense of security before crazy shenanigans ensue. Before we even get to that, however, we get one of the sweetest songs by the late talented actor and singer, Gene Wilder, as the title owner of the factory and I've got to say it's one of the most beautiful songs I've ever heard. Heck, when I did that song once for karaoke, lots of folks compared my voice to that of Gene Wilder himself for which I take as an absolute compliment.
I sincerely look forward to the many splendors there is to see during the progression of this exciting story.
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Yeah I do remember that little exchange. It's especially awkward knowing that Grandpa Joe is already married and Grandma Josephine would not like that. Course, in Mrs. Teevee's eyes she thinks he's being a creepy old man... But we'll stop that from there.
Yes the song is a beautiful rendition expressing a heart's desire for what the world can be if we can only imagine it.
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I remember the first time looking at that while helping Mr. Enigma produce this chapter... Boy, I would hate to see fanart of that moment.
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You'd think there'd be like a ride that would be able to enter rooms of memorable moments within the Chocolate Factory. Including some props and elements from the movie, even a copy of the really big contract when guests enter for the ride. I don't know if it would be like a motion ride or one of those attractions incorporating animatronics, but it would be something.
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Oooh... I hate those 'autocorrect' moments on this site. We'll need to fix that.
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Sad thing is the man passed away on my birthday. Such a shame when I first heard the news four years ago. His talents shall be greatly missed.
Have you guys seen the DVD extras? That cup that he was eating was actually wax. Then after the scene, he spat it out.
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Also gross!
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I know man, I had just finished watching Young Frankenstein the day before his death, it came on the TV as the afternoon movie of the day so it made me really get hit with the feels.
Pinkie and Cheese's dreams become a reality!
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We know that. I'm sure that's how it went out when producing that scene. We just didn't want to go with 'that' reality but rather imagining what 'Willy Wonka' was eating. But yes, I see what you mean.
That bit with the two narrators parodying the scene was just for comic relief.
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While I haven't really seen the movie as much, I have seen the Broadway rendition at least 'twice'. 'Puttin' on the Ritz' especially for both versions of the story is still fun to watch. Especially when they parody the scene with the old man alone in the cabin.
Was it a cup for drinking coffee or was it made of coffee?
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Yeah that guy is gonna have a bloody mouth
A wonderful chapter. I love that song. Keep going!
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I miss him too
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I think there is one in London
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It was an empty coffee cup, inspired by what I've got in my own office. A Christmas present from a party last year... Or was it two years ago? I don't know, I've had it for a while.
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Well good thing this isn't 'those' kind of stories... And besides, it's 'E' rated. I can't do anything bloody.
Now if it's a 'T' or 'M' rated project... Well, you have to wait.
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Ah. Still funny.
Can't wait for the Ompa Lumpa scene and what Rarity's reaction to their outfits
[NOTE: The corrections you see are bolded.]
Discord: AAH!!! MY EYES!!!
(Everyone else watching this covered their eyes as they screamed.)
Quibble: (covering Wind Sprint) Don't look, Wind Sprint!
Familiar voice: Now what's all the commotion here?
(Everyone turned to see Princesses Celestia and Luna (voice coming from the former) entering the room.)
Starlight: (gasps) Princess Celestia and Princess Luna!
(Then everycreature- except Discord- bowed before them.)
Discord: Ahh, Celestia and Luna. I was hoping you two would turn up.
Luna: What's everycreature doing here in Twilight's castle?
Apple Bloom: We're all watchin' a movie.
Sweetie: And Twilight and her friends are in it!
Celestia: (surprised) Twilight and her friends?
Luna: But why? There's no important mission that requires them.
Discord: Au contraire, dear princess of the night. Pinkie suggested them to use the television.
Celestia: She did? But what for?
(Then the group explained to Celestia and Luna everything that happened.)
Luna: That is most horrifying!
Celestia: (frowns in anger) What Filthy and Spoiled Rich did is simply inexcusable!
Luna: We cannot, WILL not let them get away with this!
Apple Bloom: That's right! You know what to do about them, right?
Luna: As a matter of fact, we do!
Celestia: But first things first: We must wait till Twilight and her friends return, so that we can tell them exactly what happened, and then we will see to it that Diamond Tiara's parents will be punished.
Garble: Well, I still say Diamond needs NEW parents!
Luna: And you are absolutely right, Garble! But we'll think of something.
Celestia: Until then, let's have a look at this movie.
Discord: Then enjoy the show. I arranged the 3D effects for you, too, you know.
(Soon, Celestia and Luna joined with the group and they all resumed watching the movie.)
(The group gasped in surprise at this.)
Celestia: Goodness!
Celestia: That's funny. Neither did I.
Luna: Nor I.
Discord: I may be a spirit of chaos, but even I can't read what's in that tiny writing.
Celestia: (frowns) Hmph. Con man talk.
Luna: We hate con artists.
Apple Bloom: He's as bad as those wretched Flim Flam Brothers.
Big Mac: Eeyup.
Big Mac: Nope.
Apple Bloom: And ah agree.
Big Mac: Eeyup.
Luna: What an incorrigible brat!
Celestia: You said it, Luna.
Smolder: No place at all.
Garble: But rock bottom!
(The two dragons gave each other five at this.)
Scootaloo: WAY wrong!
Celestia: (smiles) A lifetime supply of chocolate? How delightful.
Luna: (likewise) Yeah, a most wonderful thought!
Apple Bloom: (happily) Isn't it?
Trixie: Hey, it's more cramped in there than my cart!
Starlight: Glad we're not there.
All: (in unison) LET THEM OUT OR SHE'LL SCREAM!
Discord: (growls in irritation) WOULD YOU AUTHORS CUT IT OUT WITH THE APPLEDASH CRAP?!?! IT'S DRIVING US CRAZY!!!!
Starlight: She's right about that, you know.
Celestia: I agree.
(Everyone watching the movie gasped in amazement and confusion as well.)
Gilda: (flabbergasted) What in the world???
Discord: (enthusiastically) I'm having fun, too!
Discord: Strangest things that don't involve me, I might add.
Ocellus: I can by changing into a small animal.
Sandbar: You're right about that, Ocellus.
Celestia: (frowns) No, you oaf. It's Mozart.
Luna: What a dumb female.
(Everyone watching this was amazed as well.)
Foals: (in unison) Wooowww!
Celestia: In all my years, I... I've never seen anything like this.
Discord: Neither have I. (sniffles, as he wiped away a tear) It makes me want to cry.
(As it happened, the room around the movie seats changed into what looked like the setting of the Chocolate Room, to the amazement of everyone.)
Apple Bloom: Wow! It feels like we're in the Chocolate Room, too!
Discord: Just reach out at the screen and take whatever you want!
(To demonstrate, he reached at a candy cane on the screen and picked what looked like a clone of the same thing from it! Everyone else was amazed.)
Apple Bloom: (amazed) Look at what he did, guys!
Toola Roola: How'd he do that?!
Celestia: Simple: He's the Spirit of Chaos.
Smolder: Wow! And he made the effects of the Chocolate Room happen!
Gallus: (grins eagerly) Let's eat!
(Eagerly, everyone reached out- the unicorns and alicorns using their magic- and took whatever they want from the screen.)
Wind Sprint: (dryly) Now you tell us.
Clear Sky: Oh, hush, Wind Sprint, and eat this.
(As she said that, she handed Wind Sprint a candy berry.)
Wind Sprint: (excitedly) Oh boy!
(She took the candy berry and started eating it happily.)
Apple Bloom: (as she took a candy apple) Oh boy! A candy apple! Ah can't wait to try this!
(She chomped on it and enjoyed the taste.)
Apple Bloom: This is delicious!
Sweetie: (eating a candy berry) Mmmm!
Scootaloo: (eating a giant gummi bear) Yummy!
Trixie: (licking a lollipop) Ohhh, the Great and Powerful Trixie has never tasted anything so delicious her whole life!!!
Starlight: (eating some candy) Neither have I! This is the greatest candy ever!
Silver Spoon: (her eyes shimmering, from eating a candy cane) Sooooo taaastyyyyyy!!!
Silverstream: (eating a licorice rope) WOW!! I've never tasted anything so heavenly!!
Gilda: (as she chomped on a giant gummi bear) Man! Why can't we have any of these treats back in Griffonstone?!
Gabby: Yeah! These are really good! Maybe these could change the attitudes of us griffons forever, make us as friendly as the ponies!
Gilda: Hey! Great idea!
Gallus: Yeah! It'll make Twilight happy!
(Through the effects of Discord's 3D experience, the candy pumpkins Wonka knocked were in the air in the room the group was at.)
Apple Bloom: Oh! (as she ran for one of the candy pumpkins) Ah got it! Ah got it!
Smolder: (as she flew up towards another pumpkin) Whoa! I got it!
Garble: Get it, Smolder!
(Then she got one of the candy pumpkins in the air.)
Smolder: Got it!
Apple Bloom: (as she catches another candy pumpkin) Ah got it! Whoa!
(She almost fell, but Big Mac and Sugar Belle caught her.)
Sugar Belle: Whoop! Gotcha, little sis.
Big Mac: Eeyup!
Apple Bloom: Thanks, you guys.
(Gilda flew up and got a candy pumpkin as well.)
Gilda: I got one, too!
Garble: All right! Chow time!
(Then the group started enjoying their newly-acquired candies copied from the screen they were watching.)
Celestia: (as she took a sip of edible nectar from her own teacup-shaped flower bud cup) What a lovely song. Don't you agree, Luna?
Luna: (after sipping nectar from her own flower cup) I quite agree, Celestia. In fact, I believe Pinkie had the right idea about using the television.
Celestia: Indeed. Now, let's see what else happens. Hopefully, one of those bad kids will be eliminated.
Luna: No doubt about it, sis.
(Once they both finished their nectar, they each took a bite from their chocolate cups.)
Very awesome. Keep it and we see one little brat gets what he deserves.
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Great way to introduce celestia and Luna! Amazing job as always. You have the 'sweet' touch!
Truly a magnificent scene, kind of the same way I feel with my chronicles and all the wonderful franchises I've seen.
RIP Gene Wilder. Thanks for bringing us to a world of pure imagination, especially yours. And you can always bring us to it again and again.
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As long as there is 'Pure Imagination' in this world, he always will.
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Thanks, pal! And now all the guests are in.
By the way, whatcha think of the way the group has been getting some of the chocolate and candies from the chocolate room for themselves as well?
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With Discord on one side, ANYTHING is possible!
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You got that one right!
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Let's hope that's all the guests you'll need for this story. I was beginning to fear it might be overdone, but hopefully it plays out nicely.
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The Celestia and Luna addition was given to me by suggestion, and I was willing to do it. And this time, THEY are the final guests.
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I'm holding you up on your word.
Just so everyone knows I will be going back and forth with updates on the two current stories. I’ve just updated the Equestrian Smackdown story and so I shall be working on the next chapter for this story sometime soon. This is just so everyone knows that I will alternate between my stories just so that they not stay up to date
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We understand, Mr. Enigma. It'll all become routine during this period of time. It sounds manageable to me.
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That's good news and congrats on the new story
I'm sure Pinkie Pie appreciates Gene Wilder's use of randomly singing in public.
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And I thought that guy was one of the Doctor Whos. That was my mistake, especially when I checked his resume.
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I first heard of Tim (literally) as a voice actor alongside the other Goodies (Bill Oddie and Graeme Garden) in the Bananaman cartoon series when I was a kid in the 80's. The next I heard of him, he was playing Cacofonix the Bard in the feature length cartoon "Asterix and the Big Fight" again alongside Bill Oddie, who was playing Asterix. I didn't find out about the Goodies until I was in my Twenties but I don't mind admitting I love their antics and cartoonesque humour.
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Whatever choice you make, we will be alright with. Take your time.
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When I first saw the movie, I thought it was Peter Tork of the Monkees. The two did look alike.
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Well I've never heard of 'The Monkees', so I wouldn't even know the chap regardless.
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The monkees are a band from the late sixties early seventies https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MADRPuAcKFA