After being flung into a portal by yours truly: Dr eggman, he is transported to Equestria along with the chaos emeralds. he faces challenges he'll have to do on his own. Well not really...
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Not bad. It's a good start
I'll have to keep my eye on this 1
Tail's intelligence is actually now measured in canon to be higher than Eggman's 300+ IQ simply from his knack of constantly coming up with ways to counter said evil genius' "unbeatable" plans... 290 is kind of a low number due to the evidence of the contrary. The only one off the top of my head I can think of who has a higher intelligence than Tails is Wave.
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Oh. thanks for that man.
Love the premise and the direction, but a few technical difficulties I noticed:
Spelling/grammar issues, "right word/wrong spelling" mistakes, sliding tenses, few instances of repitition, and the rapid fire exposition at the end makes the pace feel a bit quick.
Might be worth looking into a pre-reader/editor.
It was wonderful to see that you didn't hand Tails the "idiot ball" and set him straight to identifying and addressing the biggest problem, very in character (keep the smart characters smart and all that) and well played, even if it did set a quick pace.
Looking forward to more and hope to see your future growth as an author. ^^
What up with the romance?
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You'll see...
(Sees romance tag alongside Celestia, Twilight and Chrysalis tagged)
Ooooo... Tails you sly fox you... ;)
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Sly fox indeed...
Wait until he meets with Spike.
Oooo. This is good. I like it. Keep going buddy.
This is fine. I like it.
Which Sonic continuity is this?
Wonder if there's a Chao Garden in Equestria?
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Maybe... they're might be a Chaos too...
(Technically magic does exist in Sonic. Amy litterally poofs her hammer into existance, the storybook games are magic worlds contained inside books, Dark Gaia and Chip seem to be the mystic avatars of creation and destruction, comic storlines, etc....)
Update?
Like in Sonic X only with the elements of harmony instead of the Chaos Emeralds?
You probably meant 'Idle'.
Man, I am soo going to say let's ship them together ok.
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Bruh Tails is 8.
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in fox years or human years
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Why is that a question for you?
10302015
I have no clue
Very poor choice of words
10075672 Seriously? That bird brain might be a competent engineer, but she isn't even in Tails' league. She'd been building Gears all her life, and Tails came up with a better one on his first try. 'Ha!' I say and 'Ha' again!
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Improving an existing tech is impressive but not definitive. She built the tech from barely functioning stolen parts. He just one upped her because he probably used better resources and improved on an idea that already existed. Its debatable who is smarter but building a hoverboard from nothing is still superior to slapping on turbo boosters to said existing hoverboard.
Update this story!
Good Story, I hope we Super Tails in future chapters.👍😁
My favorite Sonic character. I'll have to read this when I get time.
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mine too
I like this story it's good
New chapter ????
New chapters ??????
Update ???
Please continue this story
Com on update 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
New chapters ??????
Rainbow Dash vs One of the Sonic was 1 pixel Difference
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Chaos powers work as Magic
archie comic has magicians
as with Fleetway should be wizards
The chaos ebmeralds are kind of magic items
There is the Transformation and dark gaia
sonic underground, revert the awarness of robotecised people to when they were not machines
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That is Hammer space or pocket dimention, between cartoon logic or magic choose your pick
ook ...
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Maybe it's Sinister 6 but I'm not sure
Still Sonic Adventure 2 which is the Tails I admire
great minds think alike
I remember I had ridden it , almost forgot, still feel the same
please UPDATE THE STORY IT'S SO GOOD
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"birdbrain"
mfs when they see the corvus family pull up at their house: