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Malowith


Some guy

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When a man is sent to equestria in the mind of a local, he must decide whether to intervene or let fate pull its strings. With limited knowledge of the future, he must discover his purpose and possibly find a way home.

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I've had this idea building in my head since season 6 and It will be nice to finally get it down on paper. Lots of cliches: human with MLP knowledge, seventh element, etc. But I hope to at least do something good with them, keyword: hope.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

Interesting ...

This has the potential to fall into a lot of the same, horrible traps that HIE's generally do, especially because it's both a changeling and Seventh Element story, but I remain cautiously optimistic.

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Yeah, I know, but like I mentioned I've been building this story for years in my head. So many important plot points in the future rely on these things that I can't take them out, but it's because of these plot points that I hope to build something good.

I was able to take one thing out, though. Blue screen was originally a self-insert. Thankfully, over time, I was able to build him as a unique character. It was kinda cringe back then. I have a different self-insert ponysona now, who will NOT be appearing in this story other than maybe a cameo.

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Well, I look forward to it.

Goy

You're certainly not bad too shabby at writing, looking forward to seeing where this story goes. It's been quite enjoyable so far. Cheers !

I can't wait for the moment his friends find out about what he really is, a human in a changeling's body disguised as a unicorn.

I feel like I drank the cheapest beer on earth. The work is very weak. I would advise you to reconsider everything, because I doubt that a large audience will be so willing to read.

An interesting start.

I take it the seventh element comes from Stygian?
And I prefer courage from Seven Lights.

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I wonder if it is going to be revealed during Dicord's escape, the wedding invasion or curveball: the gala.

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Who knows, we will have to wait until the next chapter happens.

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