Based on Cupcakes, this story is a tale of a young male who ventures into the world of Equestria, confronts his past sins, and changes Equestria forever.
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seems legit
At least if you're going to write a trollfic, do a clever one.
I laughed, I cried, I fapped.
70673
>implying it's not clever
Your description is shorter than your title.
You, sir, take logic as a mere suggestion.
Cupcakes... Past Sins...
Wait a minute
I FIND THIS VERY HARD TO MASTURBATE TO
70676
Don't worry. It's not.
That may have been one of the better trollfics I've read.
That's sorta damning with faint praise, though, since I've never read any enjoyable trollfics in my life.
Oh, crap.
I just laughed at a four-year-old girl getting murdered.
I am a terrible person.
70673
I am personally convinced that this fic was written by God himself. Once Merriam Webster showed up that proved it.
My first immediate reaction: Da fuq?
Out of all the useless shit I've been exposed to, this one amused me a little.
These internets are heavy. Take three.
This schit, is the best thing I have ever read ever.
70698
I laughed at a video of some random guy beating a poodle toy to death when I was 16.
I still laugh every time I see it.
HA! I'M A WORSE PERSON! I WIN!
The references to other bad fanfics were cute, but the whole concept of parodying bad writing was played out long ago. Nor is this a particularly clever parody, as mentioned above. I admit to one halfhearted chuckle, but other than that, it falls flat entirely. You also missed any chance at deeply disturbing your reader by failing to build any sort of reader engagement or sympathy before launching into the mindless death.
The rating system doesn't permit the negative numbers that this would normally warrant, so I'll give it 2/5 as a trollfic for giving me an excuse to entertain myself by writing this comment.
I love you.
70814 AGAIN
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This... This isn't very good...
70824 Shut your face!
70825
Don't get me wrong, as far as this sort of crack/parody fic goes, I've seen far worse, and the fact that it's merely mediocre is sort of astounding given that the genre tends to be composed of either utter trash or absurd brilliance. I just think this is a 2/5 example of a genre that tends to be .5/5 or 5/5 with no middle ground. I just don't find it very funny.
Title is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY to long.
What is this i don't even...
Best fic 2011.
What a clusterfuck of a title...
*read*
I lol'd at this pretty hard :P Good job
70673
This was incredibly clever xD
BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH OMG!........OMG!.......I'M DYING! HAHAAHAH HELP ME!!!!!!!!
What the Shit???
70835
NO REALLY THANK YOU FOR POINTING THAT OUT GOOD SIR I WOULD NEVER HAVE NOTICED
YOU ARE THE BEST
I CAN TELL YOU ARE AN ADEPT AT UNDERSTANDING HUMOUR
Not even on cocaine did I find this story amusing.
>>Tally-Wacker (guest)
Implying your on cocaine.
...sir you have single handedly manged to even mindfuck me and that takes some sort of skill.
CONGRATULATIONS U GET A FUCKING COOKIE MADE OF MAN
So ....Sonic took off rainbow dash wings, there's a mad man looking for blood on the lose,
Merriam Webster some how got in there, Mary Sue (Which is what the fic is) is handing this situation like a boss,
and the ponies are the only normal ones here........ Thank god im a troll or otherwise I'd be mindfucked by now.
i havent even read it yet, and i'm still confused.... just.... what?
THE FUCK WAS GOING ON IN THE LAST CHAPTER DA FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
ALL I'M GONNA SAY IS...
MAJOR
FUCKING
MINDFUCK
This was, without a doubt, the most moving piece of literature I have read in a long while. The characters were well-developed, the plot left no room for confusion, and your well-worded introductions of overused characters completely eliminated the normal sense of cliché one would feel when Merriam Webster or Rainbow Dash enters the scene in other fanfics. Your title was flawless: a little short, but interesting enough to grasp my unwavering attention. The only possible error I could find was the fact that Merriam Webster wondered why everything was bigger and eight, when, in the thrilling and captivating masterpiece "Spiderses," it is clear that he already knew why everything was bigger and eight. However, I grant you, as the author, the perfect liberty to make whatever changes to your characters as you feel are necessary, and you kept him in impeccable character while negotiating this change. Five stars, my friend. Five stars.
I HAD to read this for the fucking huge ass title
>Supermunchor And that's only the title!
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What the ass is this fuck and how did it get approved?
So you basically took ED's entire list of things not to do and made it a title. Lets see where this is going.
70683 I agree.
Maybe you shouldn't put the description because THE TITLE EXPLAINS IT ALL!
*looks at title*
Hmmmm I wonder what's gonna happen in this story?
70698 your avatar said otherwise
( the lyra face)