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Omegathyst
Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
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I don’t know how to feel about this.
10055119
That's fair.
Great job!
guess marefriend would be sunset get back form human world,
Well, the description is accurate... but... I need to think about where life goes from here.
Ah yes... The Why-Boner
10082626
With a vengeance
Well jeez, I have no idea why but this just gave me an existential crisis.
Still er... a good read though
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Builds a decent sense of mystery in the beginning.
-Very fast and rushed.
-Doesn’t do justice to the emotionally heavy topics it’s trying to deal with.
-I barely have time in this story to even figure out what’s going on.
-The ending is confusing, and letting who “she” is remain a mystery is more annoying than intriguing.
-It creates a nice sense of them doing it even though both of them know they shouldn’t.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 70/100
Allure: 40/100
Enticement: 60/100
Immersion: 60/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 320/500
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Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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I'm just surprised that this scored higher than the other two entries, given its initial downvote ratio. Thanks for the review! 😊
i think the marefriend could be sunset.