This chapter shows a great improvement over the first one. You even explained how he knows about magic. Good Job.

my evil side: yeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssss

normal me: great work keep it up

Good show, looking forward to more content!! If you ever need anything, let me know

"I'm going to teach you how to use magic." Her smile spread from ear to ear, "But it won't be easy. Cuts, bruises, even broken are a strong possibility. Are you ready for that?" She squirmed a little but held a determined look.

Do you mean
Even a broken bone is a strong possibility?

Also, an interesting story, It could use some touching up and maybe some more detail but its not to bad. Keep writing it and improving as you go along, I would like to see where the story goes from here.

This was a sad awesome chapter. I'm surprised you didn't make a tag for it. I hope his sister is ok and one day they will need again.