Whiskey lullabies

Rainbow Dash has been struggling with her sobriety for a while now, and as she nears her breaking point at a party, she learns that it's ok to lean on her friends for support.

Rated for mentioning/ relation to substance abuse.

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shadow wolf1573

shadow wolf1573 #1 · Jan 5th, 2020 · · ·

Pretty good

Vermaak

Vermaak #2 · Feb 2nd, 2020 · 1 · ·

It’s interesting to read these kind of stories, as so much people struggle with alcohol and other drugs. I can’t imagine how hard it must be.

Anyways, good read. Short and sweet.

Avellana

Avellana #3 · Feb 18th, 2020 · · ·

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Hey, thanks for the comment I’m glad you liked reading it

Applefai

Applefai #4 · Nov 8th, 2021 · · ·

Pretty good story man. There are a few things that need fixin'

Whores should be whore's in this context

The night hadn’t started off so bad. It was Pinkie Pie’s 21st, so she’d invited me and the girls to her house for what she called a “small get together”. In hindsight, I should of known better than to take that crazy whores word on it, as by the time I arrived the place was absolutely heaving with people, much more then the “just us girls” we were promised. Anyway, like I said before, it wasn’t bad to begin with. I’d mostly stuck to the dance floor practically glued to Applejack, not really trusting myself to be left to my own devices.

On to should be onto since it's holding onto something

It felt solid. It felt good, having something to hold on to. I quickly cast my eyes around the small room, making sure no one saw me pocket the bottle in the inside of my jacket as I turned around. The room was mostly empty, save for me and a few others that I didn’t recognise. I wrapped my jacket close around me, reassured by the familiar shape of the whisky nestled against my body as I headed to the door and slipped outside.

My needs to be in between in and jacket

“Fuck off AJ” I growled as I screwed the cap on tightly and secured it safely in jacket once again, as if hiding it from view would make any difference. “How’d you know I was here, don’t you have anything better to do?”. I cringed internally at the words leaving my mouth, even as my glare hardened and my face twisted into a scowl.

But it was still a pretty good story and I can actually imagine the song Rainbow recognized was Whisky Lullaby

Avellana

Avellana #5 · Nov 9th, 2021 · · ·

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Hey man,

Thanks for reading my story

I admit there are quite a few typos and errors, as I’ve never been massively into proofreading my stuff

Thank you for commenting, I hope you managed to get something out of it

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