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DJ-Pon3FTW
Just here to put out my stories. Hopefully y'all will like 'em!!
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more vamponies?! how original =O
lols, i might give it a read
1163362 I know!! and I'm going with the most original vampony of all! Twilight Sparkle!
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Well I look forward to twilights story.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png
i honestly think that twilight makes the best vampony, and not just because of her name.
then again, Twilight always seems to be the victim of some sort of existential crisis, so it might not just be vampirism, she might just be fun to screw with.
thoughts?
1165645 yea... I can agree with that. She's too easy to have some sort of crisis happen to change her in some way. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
1165732 i think the only other pony ive seen having an existential crisis would be rainbow dash, and thats only if she fails the wonderbolts trials and goes and throws herself off a cloud or something.
1165750 true, but we've seen Twi go batsh*t crazy after not going her "homework"...
1165765 you have a point....I guess Twi's just naturally attracted to insanity, and "Lesson Zero" didn't exactly help that image.
1165777 No... no it didn't. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
1165792 ugh....that image of crazy twilight is....disturbing.
1165811 gotta agree with ya there... Oh well dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
1165819 cool lyra is cool
1165870 awesome pony's are awesome. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
1165914 indeed
1163373
Still a million times better than the twilight saga
1172533 AGREED!! You get five moustaches sir!
why must you make me wait for what I want? that's just mean.
1172786 ........... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
There's a shitstorm brewing in the distance and the umbrella factory just burned down.
I may put this story on hiatus for a while everypony. My other fic "On The Wings of Love" is my main focus but I DEFINITELY plan on finishing this one! Anyways, as always... stay tuned!
1276076
This is how you've made me feel right now
1276167 I take it you liked the chapter and don't want me to put this one on hiatus? lol
1276185
That pretty much sums it up, but I won't berate you for putting it on hiatus if you want. You are the writer, its your choice
1276198 well its not like I WANT to put it on hiatus. The problem I'm having is keeping my mind working with two different storylines. Oh well. I'll give it a bit longer to see if I can make it all work. Allons-y! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
Come to papa!
I hate the word vampony but the story is still pretty cool
Damn, this is off to a good start.
1295215 Thanks! I was worried that I was moving it a bit fast but generally people seem to be liking it
I think you should work on this one.I've read all of the twilight vampony fics I would find and this one takes the cake.the plot is great and the character structure is good as well. Also I expect a 30k story from this At least.nice job so far so please don't stop.
PS-vampony twi with wings is awesome too. Just sayin
moar now
1296195>>1296906 there shall be more up soon. Also, I agree vampony Twilight with wings is awesome vampony. Question is... how am I going to make that happen? So many choices, so many possibilities. Keep watching and reading because I have another chapter in the works right now.
I would read some Other vampony twi stories for inspiration. Sometimes she got her wings from power overload or something. Im sure if you think about it and find the right inspiration you'll figure it out.
1301671 Oh I have the inspiration for how I'm going to do that. It'll be... interesting. hehe dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
First beetchez!
Good chapter, and I haven't even read it yet, but I know it's gonna be good.
1358139 Please read! I hope you enjoy!
1358141
Don't worry i will. Im lovin it so far.
EDIT-Yay! Alicorn twilight. I didn't know if you would listen to my suggestion but ya did, and it was awesome. Also the part with Vinyl is really good, you surprised me there.
My only problem with the story is it's not long enough. Longer chapters, faster releases on chapters, and I wouldn't be surprised if you get featured.
1358146 Oh I planned on making Twilight an alicorn from the get-go. If I wasn't juggling several stories at the same time I could probably get the chapters out sooner. However, until I finish my other one. *I have four or five chapters there tops* I won't be able to completely focus on this one as I'm not putting either one on hiatus. Oh well. Allons-y!
DJ-Pon3FTW
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Sounds okay to me, as long as sooner or later the chapters will be out faster, this story is great.
By the way did you happen to read Crimson Night? The Twilight getting wings part seems to sort of match that of Crimson Night, except some of the details are different. Good way to do it though, any other way may have been a bit cliche.
I cannot get enough of Vampony Twilight, I just can't.
Ever.
However, this was a very good way to bring out the transformation, seeing that most others handle it in the way of 'Poof! Somepony's a vampony! LOL!" You did it very well, seeing that you made the Transformation painful, and the Princesses all react in their own special ways.
Nice touch on the vampiraphobia with Celestia there, makes her feel just a bit more mortal, and it's a fantastic way for some conflict, along with the fact that her faithful student it now a vampire.
Oh, and the wings are a nice touch, though, as I may ask, did anypony else feed off of Luna the entire time she turned ponies all those years ago?
i already love this
YAY Vampmonies 
I love this story!
What was Twilights first act as a full vampire?
Wingboner!
oh and Vinyl was pretty cool too
i like where this story is going and are looking forward to the next chapter
"Umm, now that you mention it... I might have to come back later and get it."
Okay, plot hole:
a) Canonically Twilight has been shown levitating tremendously heavy things.
b) She uses magic (esp. levitation) all the time, casually.
Therefore it's a bit beyond belief that she either doesn't think of levitating the amethyst for the duration of the trip back, or considers it an unfeasible option.
While it is possible for a vampony to be killed, they cannot die of any natural cause
So vamponies die when they are killed? I'm sure Shirou Emiya approves
I'm hoping this will be the first vampony story I can actually like. I look at each of them when they come up, but all those which came before this had some serious issues. This only has a few plotholes, which hardly constitute fatal wounds, and it has a Luna I really like, yeah, Luna really works in this
Well… that explains a lot…
After reading what you have so far here, the only really noticeable problem is with sentence length. You use more words and conjunctions than are good for your sentences, so they get overrun with verbiage -- I mean end up running on too long
. Your character dialogue is a little less verbose, consider adapting the story writing to the level of the dialogue writing, and in general if you can reasonably omit a word, do so.
I just noticed the gore tag on this, so I dunno whether I'm gonna continue reading this, that's not to my tastes. Still, overall thumbs up, you've done a good job so far! You show some particular skill at communicating drama :)
Was not expecting Vinyl to show up.
1358243 actually, yes I did read Crimson Night lol. That one, plus a few other vampony fics I've read were my main inspirations to write a vampony fic of my own.
1358349 Read and find out if they did
1358624 Yea, my reasoning for her coming back and getting it later is more because she wants to surprise spike. Kinda hard to do when your horn is glowing, yea? lol. Thanks for the criticism! I welcome constructive criticism because this is one of my first fics and I'm looking to refine my writing style. And yea, the gore tag will come into play later and I'm not gong to lie... its probably going to get pretty descriptive. However, as many writers do when their stories get "cloppy" I will be warning everyone when a chapter contains gore *or clop for that matter* I do hope you enjoy the rest of the fic
1358530 Thanks! I hope to start putting chapters out a bit quicker now.
1358714 What explains a lot?
1358472 I was wondering if anyone was going to call that one!
1359519
Red eyes, nocturnal job, wears sunglasses…
C'mon, if that's not the BIGGEST indication, I don't know what is!