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So this is the end?

What happens after death? Chrysalis finds out.

Just a quick first pony point of view story I came up with. I'll admit, it's probably not that great, but I hope you enjoy it anyways!

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pinkameany

pinkameany #1 · Sep 13th, 2013 · · ·

It's good. Quite sad too. chrysalis isn't my favorite villain, but she had the best plot to take over, and it almost worked. seeing this as her punishment sent chills down my spine. chapter 2 soon?

DJ-Pon3FTW

DJ-Pon3FTW #2 · Sep 13th, 2013 · · ·

3198905 w-what?? More? As in... Encore? Another perspective or pony's pov?

Also... You liked it? *reads comment again, shakes head, shrugs*

I may put a chapter two out... Maybe. Or I may just re-write the whole thing when my brain isn't buzzing like a hornets nest because I like the premise of the story, just not the execution (badum-tss)

pinkameany

pinkameany #3 · Sep 13th, 2013 · · ·

3198924 Possibly from Fluttershys P.O.V?

Yes I like it very much. Stories like this help me bond with each character more than I do from just watching the show. Chrissy wasn't all bad she just wanted to rule all of Equestria.

DJ-Pon3FTW

DJ-Pon3FTW #4 · Sep 13th, 2013 · · ·

3198944 ............................. I-okay...

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #5 · Feb 12th, 2015 · · ·

3198965 I would have appreciated this more if they weren't so pretentious about it. The ponies I mean... it's a bit... well not so much fitting for them.