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Marcibel


"If you want to get better at anything, you have to be able to enjoy being bad at it." (PFP by @renawoods.bsky.social)

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With Hearth's Warming Eve hanging in the balance, Sunset and Tempest race out to save the day—but they don't get very far.


This was written for Libertydude as a part of Jinglemas 2019! For more information about Jinglemas, checkout our group!

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Lovely little christmas piece^^ Can totally see that being the chemistry between those two.

You really do have a way with making a scene feel lively, Marci. I hope you know that.

Heh, that's just about what I figured these two would do when stuck with each other (literally in this case). I liked how Princess Twilight was the one to put Sunset on the right track, and how Tempest plays the part as the 'older' teammate annoyed with her partner's cockiness.

Thanks for the fic!

Good stuff, but it left me with a number of questions. Why has Sunset come back to Equestria permanently? (Sure, graduation, but why did she pick ponies, especially given her growing frustration with attempts to interact with the locals?) If the bindings were physically weak, how did Tempest not break through her bonds in a matter of moments. And, well...

“Redemption isn’t always earned by saving the day. It can done slowly, making small amends when you can, where you can.”

It was my understanding that she did a fair amount of that as well. I mean, the importance of little kindnesses was basically the lesson of Forgotten Friendship.

Still, overall, a most amusing little character piece. Merry Jinglemas.

I kinda hoped it would be an actual failure to save the holidays.

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