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Zontan


Nitpicking your math errors is how I show I care.

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A compilation of all my entries for Quills and Sofas Speedwriting that either weren't long enough or weren't polished enough to warrant their own story.

Chapters are unconnected and have more detailed tags at the top.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 15 )

Hey, hey Zontan

Rarity blinked, and realized she’d been staring directly into Spike’s abs

Just when you thought I'd forget

Why do I have a feeling there was some unmentioned collateral damage?

Everything stays right where you left it
Everything stays, but it still changes
Ever so slightly, daily and nightly
In little ways, when everything stays.

Gotta admit, those two always were cute together.

Heh. At first I was expecting something supernatural, but this works better.

"I don't suppose you brought a deck of cards?"

Luna wouldn't be in position to know about the Boogeymare thing immediately after return. The Elements banished her to the moon not Celestia

You took the most glorious part of Our night, the night We hoped ponies would appreciate further, and turned it into a symbol of what We became!

I'm not sure what this means

Comment posted by garfan deleted Jan 5th, 2020

This was really sweet, and presented a not often considered angle of Lunas return very effectively
Enjoyed this quite a bit mate! Nicely done :twilightsmile:

I'm a little surprised that there aren't more chapters.

This was a really engaging and heartbreaking vignette mate!
It always hits me hard, that kinda feeling of someone losing out on something or permanently destroying something because of their stubbornness, so the end really got me

I'll say what I said during the contest: you brought feels to a drunk fight, my dude. And god dammit, it worked because you're such a strong writer! This one was really good. You're really good.

A bit quick on the reveal/climax, but it's hard to be unhappy with adorable robots and ship-teasing on the table, isn't it? :raritywink:

My legacy will last forever, after all.

A statement which gains an unintended irony after the G5 movie.

Short, sweet, and very in character for both of them. This was lovely, and I can just imagine the fun Fluttershy will have listening to Discord's tales when he next shows up at her doorstep. :)

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