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Chronicler06


Anything can be awesome when it's made of Lego.

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(Takes place between LEGO Equestria Girls 7 and LEGO Equestria Girls 8.)

The Equestria Girls of Canterlot City's LEGO Team have defeated a number of villains over the years, many of whom later regretted their poor choices. Convinced that these former villains deserve a second chance, Celestia Playwell has decided to create a new team within the LEGO Team that would consist of these former adversaries, and assigns the seven Equestria Girls to go out and invite them to join this new team. Some candidates are easily reasonable, others are rather questionable, and a certain few are so controversial that only two of the Equestria Girls are even told about them.

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But, doesn't Principal Celestia only have a one-word name?

A very interesting start.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

You're making your own Suicide Squad, I like it

Sonata I can see wanting to join. It's the other two I'm more worried about.

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In Chronicler's universe no, you better read/reread previous stories to understand why (and she's not a principal here)

New story and I managed to read this chapter just a day after it was posted (YAY :yay:)
Well that very intriguing project, I have no doubts that the first five girls will work together just fine (maybe not right from the start but after some teamwork time) but sirens it's a Russian roulette play. Sonata will join without questions, just promise her some free taco :pinkiehappy:, Adagio will likely need some very strong words and Aria... well I think she will join the project only if others do so.

Celestia let out a sigh of frustration and stated, “As I said back in the other room, this project is completely voluntary. It is entirely their choice on whether or not they join this specialized team. The worst that could happen is they say no and nothing more will come of this.”

Oh no Tia you're wrong, the worst that could happen is they say yes then escape and start causing troubles across the Lego world while trying to get their powers back.

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Promise her a free taco and she will be begging to join :pinkiehappy:

I'm pleased to say that I've been able to finish writing the second part and I'll be posting it tomorrow, though it may take some time due to just how long it turned out to be.

9972065 In all honesty, I'm not yet sure what I'm even gonna do with them in later stories. Pretty much the main reason I decided to try this is because I wanted to show everyone that (unlike the official Equestria Girls where the most they got was an occasional brief background appearance) I'm not going to forget that those former villains are still around and trying to get by as best as they can after facing the consequences of their terrible actions.

9972430 It's not just their personalities that are a factor, but also their current status in life and how acceptable they find it to be, so don't be so quick to assume anything.

9973331 Hey, it's nice to see someone new come along and express interest in my fanfiction series. Hope to see you stick around for the rest of the stories I've got planned. Anyway, as I just mentioned, don't be so quick to assume the outcome, as you have yet to see just what these people have been up to since they were last seen.

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I'm gonna stay to the end you managed to combine 2 things I love, and your series along the few really good stories that I read and since I caught up with all your stories you can expect me to comment under each chapter from now on.
Well come on are you really think that we will be sitting here without some theories or hypothesises about what will or won't happen next?! Guessing makes reading a little bit more interesting.

Okay, so Wallflower can do Jedi mind tricks now. Interesting.

Also, Sonata did, uh, things to get things, one of those things being a potential key to her and her sisters' escape, which she hasn't used for its intended purpose for some reason. :applejackunsure: It also seems as if despite still being horribly nasty people, the Dazzlings have completely lost interest in taking over the world, which fits with what we've seen in canon.

By the way, did Juniper just basically get AJ's power or is there more to her abilities than what you were able to show?

Wow that was long, as for splitting the chapter I think splitting it into 2 parts, the first about five easy girls and the second about dazzlings, would've been much better but the choice is yours.

The first half turned out pretty much as I expected everybody agreed without any convincing, also nice to see that you let them remain some of their magic, though Juniper's power looks way too similar with AJ's one.

What especially warmed her heart was seeing her younger sister Apple Bloom was among these kids, along with her two best friends Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle.

YAY CMC having some fun time in the camp, don't wanna make a story about it:trixieshiftright:?

When Vignette opened her eyes, she was surprised to see her television screen was displaying five rather familiar minifigs. In the middle was herself with one hand on her hip and the other holding up a cellphone; to the left was Gloriosa Daisy with her arms folded and a confident smile on her face; on the far left was Trixie with both hands on her hips and her head held high with pride; to the right was Wallflower Blush slightly hunched over in shyness and slowly waving her hand; and on the far right was Juniper Montage jumping and waving her arms around.

Superhero pose :duck:

Wallflower pointed at the discarded wrapper and then at the trashcan as she scolded, “Pick that up and put it in the trash, where it belongs!”

The pedestrian momentarily remained perfectly still with a blank expression, then he walked back to the discarded wrapper as he responded almost flatly, “I will pick this up…” He picked up the discarded wrapper, then turned around and began walking towards the trashcan. “…and I will put it in the trash, where it belongs.” He tossed the wrapper into the trashcan, then continued on his way as if nothing had just happened.

That's not the droids you looking for :pinkiehappy:

The dazzlings part also turned out mostly like I thought. Chilling Sonata and Wrestler Aria was pretty fun, but I do not understand Adagio's indifference, well looks like we have to wait for next story to get more information.

Sonata glanced at a digital watch — also provided to her by Blue — on her wrist, then suddenly gasped and exclaimed, “Oh my gosh! One hour until mealtime!” She swiftly jumped out of the lounge chair. “I gotta get to the mess hall! It’s Taco Tuesday, and I wanna make sure I’m at the front of the line!” She then ran off towards the door into the building.

Phew, I have worried until this moment that there's won't be any taco jokes.

Well I think that's it, Sunset's backstage pass is next right?

For this longest chapter of anything I've ever written, I spent so many hours over many days writing it and a few more hours doing my usual double-check editing before finally posting it, which is why this ended up being posted much later in the day than usual. Much like how I decided five years ago to never again post seven chapters over seven days, I will from now on try my best to avoid writing such super long chapters, though I will acknowledge that I simply never know just how long these chapters will be until I actually write them out.

9982022 What I had in mind is that, much like how Sunset and Twilight were once corrupted by Equestrian magic and then were defeated and later gained new magical abilities after apologizing for their terrible past actions, those five girls are starting to notice signs of their new magical abilities now that they are willing to work for the good guys (which explains why the Dazzlings still don't have any new magic, as they haven't really agreed to the offer just yet). Specifically, their powers are meant to reflect the abilities they previously had: Gloriosa obviously has plant control, Vignette can use a weird mix of technology with magic, Wallflower has mind control (as it's the closest thing I could think of in relation to manipulating memories), Juniper has enhanced strength and agility (much like what her monster form had, essentially meaning that she won't need any stunt doubles if she ever does become a movie star), and Trixie is, well, I'll leave it up to reader interpretation whether or not she no longer needs her magical staff. Also, there's actually a very good reason why none of the Dazzlings are even considering making any attempts to escape from prison, but I'll wait until their next appearance to explain it within that future story.

9982230 In addition to the other stuff I just covered above, the CMCs were just a brief mention to acknowledge that I haven't forgotten about them, but I probably won't write anything specifically focusing on them, as I'm already struggling to find enough time to write as it is (though I do have plans on giving them a minor role at a certain point in the series much further down the line). Also, the best analogy I could come up with to explain the difference between the abilities of Juniper and Applejack would be to consider the difference between Captain America and Hulk, respectively, though you'll have to wait until much later in this series to see Juniper's greater agility in action (along with the others and their abilities, too). And finally, I think you forgot about the Spring Breakdown special, because the next story will be based on that (pretty much the biggest thing to look forward to in that one will be how the girls will react to visiting Equestria).

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I was joking about CMC fic, and man I already forgot the Spring breakdown (it just was soooooo bad) hope you'll manage to make it good because it was a real pain to watch and I think I see what the difference between the Juniper's and AJ's power are, well let's wait.

Calling it, Dagi is only thinking of joining to learn their weaknesses for revenge, but Aria and Sonata actually enjoy being free so they might not partake in any backstabbing or won't even know their sister's plan that could screw them all over. Plus i always see Sonata and Pinkie becoming besties

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