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Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have been together for quite some time. One night in particular, they decide to take their relationship to the next level. The following day, the two wake up...
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Aww~~
Adorable... though I can't help but imagine Dash's parents barging in to celebrate her losing her virginity.
Aww
9966438
Oh, they definitely would have, but they were out.
ok so like, i enjoyed bits of this, but the prose here is sorta janky. all the talk of like "visible muscles" made me picture dash actually like not having skin and her muscles literally being visible. then you get to stuff like this:
where okay first of all. i don't think a touch that fluttershy neither felt nor tasted would affect her, like... at all really, so clarifying that those particular touches were the ones that were unlike anything she'd ever dreamed is a little wut.
but also you're saying fluttershy tasted touches. so by this point, i'm imagining that dash is some like grotesque skinless abomination and fluttershy's a freaky alien with fucky alien senses and faff like that. which i do sorta dig, so, y'know, props for originality if that's what you were going for, but i'd sorta guess it's not, so
basically, i liked this, but i think there's a lot of room for it to be polished and stuff.
9966458
Interesting perspective. I'll take another look through and maybe make a change or two. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
9966458
Okay, so
is now
Also, I removed the "visible" part. Now that I think about it, that part seemed a little redundant.
Thanks again for the input!
9966438
I was waiting for this too! Probably because I actually did that to her in one of my fics.
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Sweet, and steamy. I approve.
Wow! I can imagine Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy getting it on. I'd like to read more stories of love. Maybe Applejack and Rarity next.
Well, now there's a premise I can't pass up on. xD
You did a good job with this. ^^
Though, the mood whiplash with Dash's part was a little distracting with how out of the blue it came when they'd been in a relationship for years.
Oh Lord. The things Fluttershy's animals possibly saw.
9977384
Cover their eyes. And ears!
They'll be traumatised after that...
I would like to see it longer but still enjoyable read
I always adored these two together, and while they were never a actual ship in the show they are deep within me.