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It should definitely take the lighter route
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B for sure.
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Thank you for pointing those out. Grammarly has been so much more helpful than the basic Microsoft Word checker, but some things during the peer review stages slip through the cracks.
I really like where this story is going and I hope you upload more chapters soon.
As for which direction I think this story should take, I think a lighter tone would probably be best, if only because WAM is an extremely niche kink and you're already appealing to a microscopic audience as is. Better to try and capture as much of that audience as possible than to alienate potential readers with kinks they might not be into.
this is amazing great job can't wait to see the rest of it
Well, I'll happily read both stories when they're published, but my personal vote is for A, due to there not being much WAM stuff in general on the site, and if there's any fatal ends to those stories, I don't know of them.
I'm actually curious though; what are your thoughts about a middle ground? The CCM still sink and drown, not only for DT and Silver Spoon's pleasure, but for their own? Either they don't fully understand how dangerous this is until they're getting sucked under, they're into the idea of drowning to death (yes, there are people with consensual quicksand fantasies) or they're initially hesitant until they're in the mud, then get carried away when they decide they're really into this kink, even if it's deadly?
There's very little consensual snuff on the site, with most of it being hard, vore and screaming and fighting, which is honestly a turn-off for me. It's absolutely possible to write fluffy snuff porn, where the characters are just into it so much that guy don't mind the death part, and that's honestly the hottest—plus it wouldn't be such a hard turn-off as betrayal and blackmail and begging for their lives would be, to the average reader.
Like I said, thoughts?
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