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This is short, but oh so sweet. I wouldn't mind a sequel where they become a bit more candid with each other on this
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I agree well done
On a re-read, the only serious critique I can think of is that Luna's "Moment-killer" at the end doesn't make as much sense with the indistinct perspective. Essentially, if it was either done as a reveal to both Celestia and us, with only Celestia's POV it would work. The other way, where we still know and Celestia doesn't, would work if there had been a break when we got to the parts detailing Luna's perspective and where they differed/changed to Celestia's. As it is though, it makes Luna's comment fall a bit flat, as we know Luna was there, and that Celestia doesn't (despite her momentary comment on her sister indulging herself) doesn't register strongly enough to work, like it isn't a proper secret.
That said though, it is always good to see some solidly good cock-vore on this site, and it certainly is quite relevant to me as I am doing some writing on another site involving one story with cock-vore and another with each of the Royal Pony Sisters, so good work nonetheless.
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I feel like the fact that Cock Vore is one of the most impossible forms of vore, but still ties so strongly into natural drives and desires like domination and arousal (obviously), is what makes it so damned hot to those who like it...and I personally enjoyed the touch on Luna having a big butt, as I love 'em
nice work
I'm usually not a fan of anthro stories but I had to admit I like this one.
9949719
A fair point. I'll keep that in mind for the future. And I'm glad you liked it.
Before I consider reading this, I just have to ask - is the cum digestion consensual and non-painful?
9950865
Ummmm...yes, very much so. Also very brief.
9950844
I mean seriously, the teasing between them, just the right things about Celestia's dick described as Luna is ingested...(shivers with delight).
I do enjoy it. I am glad you took that well, as that really is the only flaw. Other than that, this is an exceptionally good bit of cock-vore, and more than a little funny with the casual banter between both sisters
Darn. You got my hopes up with public vore involving volunteers. Any chance of an alt version where it's the audience instead of Luna?
Bonus points if it's not even a dream, or she thinks it's a dream but it isn't.
Celestia's
giggle
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Much appreciated. 
10020643
Fixed.
10024019
Heh, no problem, it's somewhat weird how easily I notice it.
9949722
Given the term "mooning" this is kind of obligatory.