Lorcan, Max and Dawn Darcy, along with Jake, Kyle, Anya, and Lorcan and Jake's daughter Ellie, have been transported to Equestria, where they reunite with Sonic the Hedgehog. The Mane 6, CMC, Spike, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence discovers that Everypony in Equestria have gone missing.
Now the Rebels team up with them to find a clue in Manehatten's new Super Mall in order find out about their friends' disappearance.
- *This story is inspired by Kingdom Hearts III Chapter, Toy Box.
Chapters (2)
You are in need of an editor. I am willing to volunteer myself.
As for the story itself, whoo baby that's a lot of baggage. Certainly compelling to keep reading, heck you could probably write a good story even without the ponies.
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