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With Twilight now reigning over Equestria, her trusty Friendship Council at her side, the world should be settling into an era of peace and prosperity like nothing ever seen before. And yet, Dash is convinced that everything's gone wrong.

Fortunately, Applejack's there for her.

Applejack's always there for her.

The original version of this story took 4th place in the 124th Writeoff contest, "Rot."

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Comments ( 24 )

How in the heck did you manage to get my literal heart to smile?

Yeah I've just never got into the whole appledash ship. I just don't see it. Different strokes for different folks :moustache:

Why are there so many downvotes? Do people really hate AppleDash THAT much, or what?
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EDIT: In the time since I first posted this comment, it seems the ratio's improved by a lot. Neat!

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I'm personally not an AppleDash fan either, but just out of curiosity: which ship(s) are you into?

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I've been a sucker for TwiSpike (I know it's weird since their siblings in the show but not in my fic universe:moustache:)
RariSpike
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Quite a few really. Just the top of my head.

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I don't judge ships preferences (except sometimes if they're blood related, but it's not not that often really). Personally, I'm not really interested in ships (I have a few). I'd say I only have one ship that i really love (in the mlp fandom that is) and it would be TwiDash. Every ship can be canon in the world of fanfiction after all:eeyup:.

I loved it! Appledash is my favorite ship, and you captured the two of them well. I dont understand the downvotes. I have an appledash fic too, and every chapter I post I get like 1-2 downvotes. (But also a couple upvotes too, so we’re not alone!) Again, very well done.

This is a sweet story.

Yeah, don’t let the downvotes get you down, it doesn’t necessarly mean your story is bad. I had a few of them on my latest story (and I didn’t really understand why), but when I read the few feedbacks I had, it looked like it was really good (from their perspective at least). I don’t ship AppleDash, but I hope you continue writing in a good mood!

You know, I was worried that the "Last Problem" would have all sort of unwanted new canon, and piss people off no end (like the Harry Potter epilogue, but worse) but then I saw it, and it was ...ok, with what ships they had fairly popular ones (I'm Fluttercord myself), and thought to myself that there wouldn't be too much anger.

Judging from the number of downvotes on this canon-positive story, I may have been wrong.

I just love this ship so much.

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Thanks, folks:

I think 9937319 has the right of it. My previous story, "Perfectly Imperfect," also set after the last episode, has Rarity and Twilight getting together after they help Discord propose to Fluttershy, and it's got almost the same ratio of down thumbs to up thumbs... :eeyup:

Mike

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That doesn't make sense to me. I've seen several post-finale FlutterCord fics (their relationship heavily implied or outright confirmed) enjoy quite a bit of success, and that's even after a decent-sized chunk of the fandom turned on the ship after what Discord pulled in the finale. And it shouldn't really matter now anyway, seeing as these two ships have been sailing for years regardless. I don't think "people dislike the ship" is the right explanation; or, at least, it's not the only part of it.

Really wish one of the people who disliked the fic would speak up. Feedback is important, y'know!
:)

I do like this story, I think its sweet, but...why the hell is Applejack saying "Mebbe" instead of "Maybe"? It doesn't sound anything like how Applejack actually says that word in the show and also just looks plain weird. A minor nitpick, I know, but things like that are really distracting.

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Mebbe thats why there's so many dislikes.

My only issue is I don't think in the Epoluge Dash was anywhere near retirement age, so yes when Dash faces retirement she's have this issue, I just think your chosen time frame was too soon. This is clearly before Little Cheese was born, I think he'd be at least a teen when Auntie Dash retired.

Nice. Love the final line.

Lovely stuff, especially how ponies needing to tend to nature got Dash to come out and say... well, something close to her true feelings.

This is one of the benefits of shipping agnosticism; I can enjoy all the cute pairings! And this is most certainly one of them. Thank you for it.

And yeah, thinking about Discord and Fluttershy rolling around or whatever back at her place might get me a little queasy." She managed to twitch her lips into something that felt like a smile. "But hey, I always knew Shy had the biggest freak flag of any of us, and it's great seeing it fly, y'know?"

Ehh! Fluttercord cuteness!

The whole fic is adorable (I love AppleDash) but the tiny inclusion of Fluttercord made it all the better. :twilightblush:

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Thanks!

"Flapjacks" is a larger AppleDash story I wrote a while ago if you might be interested, and while "Perfectly Imperfect" is mostly a RariTwi story, it does have a scene where Discord proposes to Fluttershy and a later scene that takes place during their wedding reception. :twilightsmile:

Mike

This was a nice story.

D'aaaw. Those two are just... precious! :rainbowlaugh: Sweet as sugar.
Thank you!

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Maybe.I don't everyone has there own opinion on it.

As both a Soarindash/Appledash shipper it a sweet story.

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