Set some time after the events of "Crusaders of the Lost Mark", a disaster at a class field trip provides a unique opportunity for Diamond Tiara and Scootaloo to become genuine friends. A chance for the former bully and the Cutie Mark Crusaders to reconnect on good terms is finally within reach. However Scootaloo finds that being friends with even a reformed Diamond Tiara is just too much for her. In true Crusader fashion, Scootaloo and her friends resort to a convoluted scheme to save face.
Chapters (13)
I'll read
Didn't this story used to have more chapters?
This is my first story on Fim Fiction and my first time posting it anywhere. You may have this story mistaken for another one.
leave it to diamond tiara to be over dramatic xD
feather bangshttps://youtu.be/WWaLxFIVX1s
merciful celesta save us!
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Hello friend.
Sorry for the extended hiatus, busy with the holidays and editing was slow going. I have the entire story written out just getting it polished is a process.
just wait until you notice the colts slack jaw stareing scootaloo xD
and the realization comes ? ^^
short and nice chapter
pf lol i rarely see someone address pinki's eating habbit's in that way xD
yes she must be quite the fatso someday she will end up like that pony from canterlot...
Scootaloo's internal monolog:
#overdramatic diamond tiara
'evil laughter'
Those fillies have been listening to that awful Zesty Gourmand again, haven't they?
In fairness, who wouldn't want to dote on Sweetie Belle?
Okay that's just sad.
She's going to fall back on her status as Scootaloo's friend to take control of her life in order to protect her isn't she?
Pfft!
Thanks for reading everyone!
Sounds tasty.
This is a great joke, but the paragraphs in between could stand to be broken down a little more.
Wait is she excited because she can talk shop now, or is she excited for traffic? I'm so confused.
Yes Scootaloo. The ideal time and place to have a ready made breakfast is shortly after you make it.
That's a... oddly specific skill for a pony to have.
Maybe Scootaloo does need help with her dieting.
Wild Stallion ,Thank you so much for your feed back and reading, I hope my writing is enjoyable.
I tried adjusting the paragraphs and updated the line to avoid confusion with Diamond Tiara's intent when she learns the train is delayed. Let me know if anything can be improved further.
Wonder what form that would take in Equestria? Trite comments about Celestia's age and weight probably.
Any relationship to these guys?
"Kidnap Princess Celestia! Throw her in a barrel! Careful how you lift her up, mare's built like a whale!"
Might want to change the tense from past to present here.
Figures she'd be involved in this. Ponkers is always up for a crazy night.
I wonder why?
Poor Sweet DT. She's trying so hard to be a good friend, but she's so massively out of her depth.
Sven! Good to see you! How have you been? Nice to see your special effects game is still on point! Are you still a jerk?
Come on Scootaloo! You can tough it out another day! I believe in you!
Shameless OC reference from an "Roleplaying is Magic" RP we did back in 2017, I still make comics featuring these characters this were it all began
https://www.deviantart.com/lytlethelemur/art/Lock-Stalk-and-Barrel-681159073
I changed a tiny change. "the singer made a clumsy exit..."
Thank you for the feedback, feel free to provide more!
Too perfect.
Now count the number of times Diamond breaks that rule right in front of him.
"See this music? I made it up myself."
Daww!
Stop it! Your breaking this filly's heart!
If anything of that is remotely true, it sounds like a pretty good sell. I'd consider it.
Plus she's trying to bring her favorite music to Ponyvile so others can hear it.
What a sweetie!
Pfft!
This image is hilariously adorable. Hidorable.
Aww! I feel bad for Diamond Tiara now.
Wouldn't that be ironic if Scootaloo having his favorite sandwich somehow saved Diamond Tiara's meeting?
Probably not going to happen. A guy can dream though.
So many great lines! I can't decide between them!
Daww! Poor Diamond Tiara!
Because he's a pony too Scootaloo. He's a pony too.
Pfft! Yeah, they're totally going to be friends after this.
Yep that sounds like a accurate description of this scenario.
Aww gez Feather Bangs isn't a captive is he?
You know, aside from not being allowed to eat his preferred food in public.
did not see that comeing xD
cue the chase musik
Thank you so much for reading you guys!
nothing like a little freak adventure to bond right
Why isn't Silver Spoon not mentioned in the synopsis?
It was a cute story. Glad you managed to finish it.
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'Evil laughter intensifies.'