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no offence, but there are some grammar errors in this chapter, and i'm having trouble reading the format of said chapter.
And I thought Rarity is okay with Aku in chapter 3; she only criticised him for clothes, not magic eating.
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I was half asleep when writing this one. Sorry. And you know how Rarity is. She is a fickle mare. And being alone with him made her think that he was going to prey on her like all uppity mares do.
You know, I stead of pairing him with one or more of the mane six, why not try for the others like Octavia, ditzy (aka. Derpy), bon bon, etc. Would make for an interesting twist for him to have. Just a thought due to reading your AN at the bottom of the chapter
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Definitely a thought to consider.
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Always glad to help
Very enjoyable and I hope to see more also believe I’ve read several of your stories your ending in the AN “May the Darkness grant ya peace” Seems so framiler!
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this big ass paragraphs need to be broken up especially when people are talking to etch other it gets really hard to read big paragraphs especially when it is one right after another