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This story is a sequel to Victory Over the Light


(Set in an AU where Nightmare Moon wins.)

Story two in "The War" Anthology.


Dasher struggles to deal with her loss. Offered an opportunity to fight, she joins the rebellion against Queen Nightmare Moon. But will she succeed in combatting the Lunar monarch, starting a flame of hope for Equestria? Or will her fighting be in vain, as the ever encroaching darkness spreads to every corner of the world.


(Thanks to SweetStrokesStudios for making the amazing cover art for this story.)

(Also thanks to the wonderful EverfreePony for helping me edit these chapters.)

Chapters (27)
Comments ( 48 )

Once more the great story of old is brought to sight and the Archmage of even older is going to bring the rebellion’s tale to light! Why, even I may implode from the anticipation! Of course... with the information revealed I do harbor a theory about the identity of our storyteller, but that’s a secret to be revealed at a later date I suppose. Onwards, and upwards, to the great solar rebellion!

A passing mourning... sometimes it takes time to cross pass with emotions and get back to the world at hand. But as Hamlet had done for the deceased king of Denmark... it’s time to get revenge. It’s time to get the rebellion rolling.

Edit: Onwards! Nearly forgot!

Ahh... nothing like a secret club rebellion to get the blood flowing! With our talented arial acrobat and a shining light of hope to go along with we can start the slow downfall of a cruel leader. Onwards!

Comment posted by Star_Shade deleted Nov 1st, 2019
Comment posted by Star_Shade deleted Nov 1st, 2019

No spoilers, but he does play an important role later on in the series ;)

You never know when those abilities will come and be useful in the future.

Is Moon Nettle suppose to be somepony from the show or is she a new character?

She is just a friend that Dasher made in her early days. I don't think she is anyone in the series that I know of. Dasher just needed to have a friend.

I may have an idea on what Nightmare Moon’s plan is, but I’ll not give it away in case I am right. Great story so far.

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My guess has been altered but my original guess might still happen.

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Not going to lie, when I read your comment, I thought I had uploaded the wrong chapter. Can't wait to see your reaction to the next chapter though >:)

Does the bandage contain something evil?
I’m surprised of the possibility of Nightmare Moon giving her title as ruler to Dawn Lighter.
Great chapter!

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Its a kind of fabric that Dasher recognized. All will be explained in the next chapter or so.

A wonderful chapter to be told, another glittering piece in mound of gold! The introduction of our forest denizen sure to transition dasher from a citizen, a soldier at arms, to take over plenty of farms and rhyming gets hard but anyways, onward!

Trial by combat and the struggle with what’s right! It’s nice to see a Dash that’s skilled but not inherently violent. So too am I excited about the reinforcements. Does the resistance have a fighting chance? Will a taller tower of hope topple more tremendously? The fate and future are not lain bare... and I’m excited to read it! Onwards!

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Your BACK :DDDD I really enjoyed your comments, and I hope you enjoy what I have in store. I look forward to each of your comments!

Atteeeeeeention! We have a soon coming crystal empire contact and Dasher’s first mission. Two separate but parallel plots taking place and we will have plenty of story to feed on! So grab your boots and strap on your satchels, it’s time to move out and rendezvous with plenty more chapters. Of course knowing fate... nothing will ever be simple eh? Onwards!

Making it to town Dash is ready to gather and be the best femme fatale she can be... while moderate was still a success! So our mission into cloudsdale begins in earnest and the mystery that the city holds exudes an impermeable fog. The story develops and so does the questions around what the future entails. I can guarantee writing to bring me back! Onwards!

Friendly skies and evil flies, Dasher has a mess with both small talk and large politics and we’re given about what you’d expect of a high power being given gifts for supporting a certain side. Who’s to say what’s right? Doesn’t matter, what a night! Our trepidation and adventures ally seem to have been solemnly resolves for now... but much can change. Onwards!

Hey y’all I’m too lazy so uhh

[Dramatic poem about how well made the story is]

Onwards!

Great chapter! Happy Anniversary!

Is there going to be a three way battle or is Sombra’s going to form an alliance with Nightmare Moon and Twilight?

Actually, I don't really plan on doing anything with Sombra, or the Crystal empire at all. I mainly wanted to have an excuse of why Moon Melody can't just 1v1 Nightmare Moon for the throne. Thus the Empire in the north speedily appears, whisking off the best of the resistance. After all, nothing is ever easy. Will Moon Melody ever make another appearance? Possibly. Maybe when I have finished my 5 story saga, I could write a separate story detailing what happens, but that is for another time. Hope this somewhat answers your question, and I hate to dash your hopes for the future direction of the story. But don't worry, there is still much story to come! :yay:

Great chapter!

Is the pony threatening Trixie’s parents unless she betrays the rebellion?

10255782 I won't spoil any of my plans of the future, but Trixie's confidence will be tested in the future. That's all I can really say without giving away too much. Glad you liked the chapter!

Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter.

Great chapter!

What lies within the storm that Ulla fears so much?

Will Shining’s impatience result in consequences?

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You'll have to see next week!

Besides the part where you killed My FavoritePony, this was a great chapter!

Is Dasher’s ghost going to haunt Dawn Lighter and Ulla forever?

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Shh, don’t spoil what has happened! Try to use the spoiler tags to conceal what might ruin the surprise for others :raritywink:

Comment posted by THERDSTORYWHISPERER deleted Jul 16th, 2020

Great chapter! Great story!

You’re welcome!

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