Tumultuous Disharmony

by NavelColt

'Discord Rules, Celestia Drools'

“Like dominoes, Tia. Cute, amusing dominoes.”

Though the voice taunting her from behind danced in Celestia’s head like a bad migraine, the pony princess stood tall and firm, gazing out the shattered remains of a palace window. The gaping hole in the once beautifully painted glass now opened up a view to the streets of Canterlot below. Screams of horror and confusion traveled through the air in shrill tones as the once stuck-up noble ponies of the city ran for their lives, pursued by animated objects of various sizes.

“It wasn’t hard,” the spirit reflected as he floated lazily through the air, completely unperturbed by the sounds of anarchy outside. “Your ponies have some very glaring weaknesses, Tia. I was rather saddened; I was done with all but your scholarly student before they even got to the center of the maze-”

“-you will not win, Discord - you cannot stop them with your tricks,” Celestia spoke abruptly, digging a golden-decorated hoof into the tiled floor. Her gaze demonstrated both sorrow and hate - her kingdom, her subjects - everything was burning to the ground before her eyes. Not with flames of smoldering wood and straw, but of god-like magic turning the peace and harmony on its head.

The mother of Equestria was completely alienated from her own people, unable to help them.

She no longer commanded his kryptonite. To her, Discord was untouchable.

“Oh come now, Tia, there’s no need to huff and puff…that is, unless you plan on blowing my house down,” Discord mused, his serpentine body coiling around Celestia's. His large oafish face leveled with the majestic pony, and their eyes connected firmly. While Celestia shot daggers of pure loathing, Discord leered back with maleficent glee.

“Your precious ponies have no chance, my dear,” the wizard of mayhem stated merrily, using a single claw to twirl the end of Celestia’s mane teasingly. “Even your most faithful student has given in, I saw it with my own eyes.”

“You underestimate the power of connection and friendship, Discord - you always did. And it will lead to your downfall, yet again,” Celestia seethed, all at once vanishing in a burst of golden magic. A moment later she reappeared across the room by the wide open hallway doors. While Discord flipped his wound-up body around to ogle after her, the princess glared at him with a knowing frown.

“Rest assured, I have already taken measures against your tricks," she continued. "Twilight Sparkle will never let her friends down, and you will do well to remember that. There will always be harmony in the souls of ponies, and it can never be extinguished by the likes of you.”

Celestia's mind drifted back up to her private chambers. She could still feel the enchantment she had placed on her student's letters, pulsating in her regal horn. One by one they were in the process of re-delivering back to their original sender. Celestia could only hope that Twilight Sparkle would stumble upon them as soon as possible. She also hoped that Spike wouldn't be too upset with her when this was all over.

“Honestly, I come all the way up here to keep you company and all you do is give me speeches,” Discord pronounced with a heavy sigh, pretending to gag and retch all over Celestia's decorated carpets. He drifted through the air, descending next to a shattered window. Resting his claw upon the glass, he peered out into his creation. At this point, most residents of the city had either gone into hiding, or were captured by his army of pursuing fabric and manikins. Meanwhile, the city itself underwent a downpour of cola. The dark brown clouds had swept over Cloudsdale, and were now directly overhead the mountain-side city itself.

"Quite beautiful, really. It's too bad you and Lulu never understood the work I do," Discord commented. "But then again, all true artists have critics for their greatest works, I suppose."

Celestia's piercing glare bore itself right through the back of Discord's head.

"Artist?", the princess said with distaste. "Do you hear those screams, Discord? Those are not screams of appreciation or amusement. Those are screams of terror."

"Wonderful, isn't it?", the draconequus responded enthusiastically, wheeling around and clapping his mismatched hands together. "Truly music to my chaotic ears, Celestia. I say again, it's too bad you cannot appreciate things the way I do. I'm sure you'd be far less of a stick in the mud, that way. We could even hang out, maybe go to the movies. If there are no good seats left, we'd simply make the popcorn rabid, and watch as it chased ponies from their seats!"

Discord broke out into a fit of laughter as he pictured Twilight Sparkle running from an extra large bag of pony pop brand popcorn. He fell from his place in the air and landed on the magnificent red carpet with a resounding thud, flailing around in his bliss.

"I'm so very glad you find your work funny, Discord," Celestia uttered, her eyes sullen. "For no one else in this universe shares your opinion."

For the first time in his entire visit, Discord glanced up at the princess with a serious expression. Like a cobra, he slithered up into a standing position, easily towering over her. His long neck bending, he reached eye-level with the pony, and cupped her chin in his eagle-clawed hand. His misshapen eyes, glowing red, were half closed.

“If I didn't know any better Celestia, I'd say you've become even more of a killjoy than the last time I saw you, all those years ago,” he muttered, voice soft and eerie. For a long moment, the distant yells and screeches from citizens, and the sound of cola pounding down on the castle walls were the only things audible.

"...very well, Tia," Discord admitted suddenly, letting go of the pony's chin and strolling away from her. "I can see my presence is upsetting to you. It's understandable, my dashing looks do have that effect on ponies."

Dragon foot over deer hoof, the spirit of disharmony walked a ways to the center of the hallway, and turned back to cross his arms and give Celestia a courteous bow.

"I now leave you, princess. I thank you for my kingdom back, and now, if you excuse me, I have a throne I must attend to."

The very last thing Celestia heard was his joyous laughter, which echoed around the vast hallway like thunder as he vanished in a flash of light.

The sun princess stood rooted to her spot, staring at the point where he disappeared. The sudden absence of the spirit's boasting and laughter was a relief to her ears, but at the same time, the now prevalent pounding rain and shrieks from outside were not. Furrowing her eyes and turning from the chamber, Celestia marched from the hallway and quickly slammed the large oak doors with her magic, blocking out the sound. She made her way up the winding staircase towards her private chamber, at the very heart of the castle; the peak of Canterlot tower.

Her door swung open with a creak and the princess trotted inside, her eyes gracing the corner of her study. There, on a large wooden table that overlooked the city was a mound of scrolls entrapped in an enchantment. One by one they vanished in puffs of magic, and now, they had dwindled their numbers down from over seventy to less than five.

Knowing everything she could do to help was now completed, the monarch allowed herself a brief moment of rest. Laying down against the large golden pillow where she normally read the very letters she was no sending back, the white pony looked out her window and eyed the far off pink clouds above Ponyville with apprehension. Pieces of land floated in the air where they bobbed up and down gently, and the sky itself was a gigantic collection of cotton candy. No matter what had happened here in Canterlot, what had befallen Ponyville was far, far worse.

"I know you and your friends have it in you, Twilight Sparkle," Celestia whispered. "You need only remember the very lessons you so willingly once shared with me."

Comments

[Jake8765]

Lovely

[Lusewing]

Short, sweet and nicely written. You really do have to feel sorry for Celestia having to deal with Discord while he gloats.

[SSky]

Interesting, a fun read. There really is no conflict, but it doesn't matter too much. It stands very interesting as a conversation between the two. Good work. Keep it up.

[NavelColt]

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Thanks :3 Keeping in mind that there 'ideally' isn't room for a conflict outside Celestia's sense of hopelessness and anger ^^ Remember, this is a very short scene, that is supposedly taking place inside 'The Return of Harmony' arc. The 'conflict' is the same conflict as the episodes themselves, this is just a 'what if' scene from it.

[SSky]

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I understand that there is no room for conflict, and that's why I enjoy the story even without anything truly driving it. I've always kinda been interested in what Celestia was doing the whole time.

[NavelColt]

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As was I ^-^ Thanks again for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it.

[CoolStoryBrony]

Great story, needs moar Scoots.

[Belgerum]

Interesting enough, though short in nature. nice.

[brad70505]

Your first non-scootalove. Not bad

[MissytheAngle]

Just great. I can see Discord doing this before the Elements confronted him to actually defeat him like he gloated he would not be. Nothing happens but Discord bragging about his alleged victory--well, at that point, thus far, it was believed to be that, even with what Celestia did--but that's perfectly fine. I'm not even sure why I like it so much. Well, to be honest...maybe it's because this is a fanfiction with Discord and Celestia with no romance. *sigh of relief* I like the pairing and all, but it's great to just see them as enemies verbally fighting and nothing more. *shrugs* Oh, I dunno. I faved it, don't question it!

[NavelColt]

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Yeah, Celestiacord isn't a shipping I care for either in the present time, that much. Having it have been a factor in their relationship in the past, but having Celestia reject him is an interesting concept, but that's it. Glad you enjoyed this so much, and see the validness of it that I did when picturing it =3

[Zenthyrion]

Sorry it took so long for me to read this As with your other stories, your writing is superb, and you capture the characters very well. I totally read Discord's dialog in his voice

It was a little short. But considering when it takes place, the short length is understandable. Favorited, thumbed up, and take this mustached Spike for good luck ~DashPony

[Chaodiurn]

A nice approach on showing what happened "backstage". I think the length is chosen well, as it is just a short scene of the mightiest two-parter the show ever saw. Still, it contains everything that's necessary to build up joy to the last word.

Good job.

[stavekoff]

Wow. This felt like a scene from the show, i really don't know what else to say.

[NavelColt]

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That's what I aim for, so it's great to see that's how you read it! Thanks!

[Azure129]

Really loved this little exchange--I thought you captured pre reform Discord's personality excellently And you did a great job making them relate in a way that was antagonistic but also just slightly suggestive for the shippers ^_^ Thanks for this!

[NavelColt]

6016218 I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D I don't think I planned for it to be that way, but I'm glad it did. Something for everyone. x)