A lovely climax, I must say......and that ending!

Wonderful ending!!! Just wonderful!!

ALso glad you hint at them having foals!!

So her secret desires are just porn parodies of episodes? Why? Are we suppose to think she was feeling titalated when they were happening?

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Maybe not right as they were happening, but perhaps they developed over time, as the two of them grew closer.

Don't read into it so much; it's clop.

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Well that's disappointing to hear. I started Following the story because I wanted to see how you'd write these two in love. You'll remember on your blog, when you first told us about the story, I didn't know if would even have erotic elements. Now that you have gotten here, the physical component of the relationship could have told us more about them, and maybe have been really unique. But what you're telling me now seems like there isn't much reasoning behind it.

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It was going to be on the shorter side, with clop as the main element. Aside from that, all I wanted to capture was Fluttershy's thoughts on proposing, and Discord's initial worries about his immorality, and discussing those with the only pony he knew with a similar predicament.

I'm flirting with the idea of eventually writing more of these doors unlocking, but this is one of those times where it's basically just for the clop, and I leave other parts of the relationship to the readers.

Very sexy and very in character though we can tell by the final episode that Shy had no children so I'd say maybe she never wanted any. Great job.

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I'd say the animals are her children so she doesn't need any.

10002395
Completely agree.

Loved this thank you for the story!