With how confident and assertive she had gotten over the years, she was hoping this wouldn't lead to another one of her increasingly rare relapses.
The feels like you're just telling the audience about character development, with how spelled out it is. Maybe change it to "leaps and bounds" or such?
Although she initially scoffed at his suggestion of using his chaotic realm for some of the animals, she eventually had to admit that it could be handy when sanctuary space became an issue, which it periodically did.
I can't believe I didn't draw this conclusion when I rewatched that scene.
Perhaps it's because I don't ship the two of them, but it seems weird to me that she's dropping the proposal when the two haven't had a conversation about their feelings actually reaching the realm of romantic. Also, even though he clearly cares about her, it's actually been a long time since the show actually had just the two of them hanging out together. Their last get-together was back in Season 7, with Discordant Harmony (an awesome episode to be sure).
very good, please continue.
memes aside, I'm excited to see where this goes.
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Next chapter tomorrow morning! Thanks for reading!
got you saved to read later hehe
DUN DUN DUUUUNNNNN!!!
Alrighty then, let's see where this goes. I would say I can't imagine he'd say no, but knowing you...
Yes!!!!!!!!!
Yay!
Love it! Can’t wait to read more
Fluttershy proposes to Discord.
Chaos ensues.
Ohhhh, snap! Fluttershy pops the question?! This is gonna be good!
The feels like you're just telling the audience about character development, with how spelled out it is. Maybe change it to "leaps and bounds" or such?
I can't believe I didn't draw this conclusion when I rewatched that scene.
Perhaps it's because I don't ship the two of them, but it seems weird to me that she's dropping the proposal when the two haven't had a conversation about their feelings actually reaching the realm of romantic. Also, even though he clearly cares about her, it's actually been a long time since the show actually had just the two of them hanging out together. Their last get-together was back in Season 7, with Discordant Harmony (an awesome episode to be sure).
How the hell do you propose to a god?
I am really liking the opening here. You will have my supports all the way through. Wish you the best of luck.
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I reread my comment and realized I had left my suggestion unfinished. I corrected that now, sorry Miles.