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Inkblot Sonnet


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Sixty Chapters already Written! :pinkiegasp:

Might as well give this a read

Edit: Well written, but there's two things I saw

She poured him warm tea, unusual for this summer day, but it was pleasantly cool in Luna's wing of the Castle. He sipped it, savoring the bitter taste, smiling at her.
“Luna, why me? What is so special about me?” Luna had to refrain from rolling her eyes. True, the younger of the Alicorn Sisters could be naïve at times, but she still possessed the wisdom of a mare of her age.

Needs a space between these two paragraphs

Also, always indent new paragraphs using the tab key

EX:

He turned to the back wall of the room, levitating one of several dark purple capes onto his back.

He turned to the mirror, smiling at himself, then trotted down the stairs once again.

Keep up the writing though :pinkiehappy:

The dislikes without comments are pretty annoying, but whatever. If only one pony wanted to read it, I'd write it for them and only them. Heck, if nopony cared for it, I'd still write it.

Its about time someone gave luna an apprentice.Thank you so much.oh and hope to se more chapter:raritywink:

Six dislikes. No reviews explaining why. That's a little depressing. Oh well.

I shall watch and see where this goes.

Liking because I also want to write something relatively dark, and it makes me sad to see you get dislikes! :twilightsmile:

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Ah, another good chapter that was good to read. A few errors here and there, but nothing serious enough to be concerned about.
Looking forward to the future chapters :twilightsmile:

Must see MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRR!:pinkiecrazy:

Well this is Awesome so far, Hope you throw in some more chapters soon if you really have that many finished, and adjust when errors are pointed out by readers? just a thought, Great story.:twilightsmile:

1920749 Yes. Not sure when, I had a technical disaster a fair while ago, losing the unedited versions of chapters four through thirty seven, and haven't had the heart to finish this. I'm working on other projects, I rarely touch the reconstruction of chapter four but it is in progress.

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