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Does the Storm King appear in this story? What about the previous one?
Gilda vs zebracorn Sweetie belle aka magic, expert monster hunter apple bloom aka honesty, military trained Scootaloo aka loyalty.
Gilda better be breaking out some new skills of her own or I don't see her standing in the way of three trained elements of harmony. More like someone for them to test their skills and teamwork on.
Also the hype for them to meet the other three bearers of harmony is also there.
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I originally wrote these years ago, Around Season 3 or 4, only recently cleaning them up. I've tried not to let anything that happened in those following years influence. Sorry, no Storm King.
Not going to lie, I kind of want to turn this into a Trilogy, and maybe add some Elements like Storm King and things that came from the later Seasons and movies.
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Got me pumped reading your reply! Thank you.
Hopefully the story will keep you hyped, and won't have to wait too long to find those missing Elements.
good news: its rainbow dash
bad news: its rainbow death
either way, hope scootaloo wakens her element of loyalty and get a badass pair of wings or at least remind Rainbow what being a loyal friend is all about.
Maybe even another cool fight scene as well, but talk no jistu is they're best bet now with injured apple bloom and fatigued sweetie belle.
why would Discord or Fluttershy even care, they're off in their own world enjoying each other's company. Off the top of my head can't seem to think of any evil thing Discord did in this fic to have him on the same level as nightmare rarity or rainbow death other than him being a chaos magic wielder.
Might have gave Discord a pass if he did do anything bad cause he's one of my favorite characters in the show.
Also the power of loyalty allowed Scootaloo to finally surpass Rainbow death who even in her crazed state was able to for a brief period of sanity allowed her to see that her little sister had surpassed her expectations. It was a touching moment before she was fed to the machine before her eventual death in a poetic sense.
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Discord is held as one of the Apex Villains, because he is blamed as the cause for everything falling apart, and his roles in manipulating all the characters in the Shatter Storm. He also has some unspoken misdeeds during the years since then and this story. The threat he poses is also a reason he is on the list. His and Fluttershy's roles are coming. I hope I can redeem Discord for you.
I glad the moment had a strong impact, I was really passionate about my take on the Rainbow Factory and all within. Could not bring it down, without it being spectacular.
crap, they didn't put out bits for the element tracker like fluttersnide has. Good thing she brought the cheap version, cause not only did it not work 100% it also made it possible for the element of kindness to awaken, if my definition of kindness is to be believed.
The reason why they were carrying the element of laughter was to trick Fluttersnide from sensing the element of kindness which is smart as she doesn't know which form it'd take to fit its new bearer. At least I assume so and the cake twins aren't dead for real.
Kindness is a behavior marked by ethical characteristics, a pleasant disposition, and concern and consideration for others.
Hoping its a new organ cause he's going to need one in a few minutes.
this chapter is so good had to make another comment about a wild hypothesis of mines.
Despite what Discord had said, I want think he knows things are fucked and wants things to return back to how they were for the simple fact that his beloved Fluttershy has lost herself. Discord has never directly killed someone which is why I was skeptical of him killing pound cake since there's no chaos in death also he must know that FLuttersnide only wants her element because she fears she wouldn't be useful to him without it. His actions for telling the stormbreakers that was to test their resolve. That bit about Twilight, Applejack, and Rainbow dash might be him showing remorse and to give the stormbreakers someone to hate. He didn't even have to tell them about his encounter with another element breaker.
All this could just be because I'm a fan of the DIscord whose chaotic neutral who knows that the only type of chaos that should exist in the world should be his.
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I love getting your responses, and I can't say if anything you said will be right or wrong, but I'm glad you are invested. One of the reasons I enjoy doing fanfiction, is because the stories I write from have inspired me to think about the deeper levels of the tale. To see someone doing that with my work, is truly thrilling!
Thank you, and as always, I hope you enjoy what is to come.
I have an explanation as to how laughter save the cake twins,
The Dark side of harmony has many abilities that some would consider to be unnatural
also come on Trixie, come back to the light side or go out in a great and powerful blaze of glory.
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I love that idea XD
We shale see where Trixie's tale leads
thoughts about this chapter:
1.come on shining armor, if you can play your cards right and have a threesome. Cadance is already into sharing the love.
2.sorry pound, but the elements of harmony seem to be a mare's club. there's something far more sinister lurking within you.
3.managed to save Trixie, in a great and powerful fashion
4.any chance you can give Spike a head's up on Twilight being alive sweetie belle.
5.hints that rarity can be saved were here somewhere
6.going to assume Discord and Fluttersnide know that the element of kindness is in play.
also pumpkin is a unicorn, so this throws off laughter=earth pony, kindness=pegasus, generosity=unicorn, its anyone's guess as to the species x element
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Just remembered you can rate comments XP
1. I do enjoy the idea that Cadence is open to expressions of love
2. I cannot confirm nor deny these claims
3. Was there ever any doubt?
4. Uh... hmm... I never thought about that...
5. I cannot confirm nor deny these claims
6. Discord maybe, Fluttersnide maybe not
The Elements of Harmony work in mysterious ways
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I also forgot that 'the storm side of harmony is a pathway to many abilities some might find unnatural.
Since there isn't a lot of plot conveniences like a certain other movie then I should expect there to be a reason behind everything and not look to deep into it.
Is it strange that I liked the review 'The Rise of Skywalker is an Embarrassment' better than the actual movie.
dammit, a two-parter for the nightmare rarity showdown.
well at least there's some other stuff going on in this chapter to hopefully tide me over until the next update.
also calling it now, shining armor is acting sus.