Sunset should go for the faceless look more often. It suits her.

Gotta say, the angst here felt a bit jarring compared to the silly tone of the first one, especially with how Sunset, like, confessed her bedicked-ness. She was alright blurting it out and Fluttershy finding out about it, but really apprehensive about telling Rarity and livid when Rainbow Dash saw it?

(The second part I totes get, tho, 'cause Rainbow was being kind of a scummy twat)

But, I dunno, maybe it's just me, but I think this works a bit better as just a 'Sunset has a dick and is banging Fluttershy with it' kinda thing than as a direct sequel to the first one. Lots of good moments, and I really liked the shippy bits toward the end, just sorta felt less like a sequel and more its own thing or something.

Hilariously my feed split up the near simul-post of this story's chapters with a blog from another user i'm following.

"Sunset has a dick fic but the writer tries to actually think how that would fuck up with a regular girl"

Like shit man I came in thinking this was your usual "Sunset gets penis, Sunset proceeds to bang all her friends" fic but then that shit got real and left me like yooooooooo.

This was great. Loved it.

Prologue to Chapter 4: Wow. This is more serious than I expected. Usually this kind of thing turns harem hentai, but...damn.

Chapter 5: Whoa...go Fluttershy.

Chapter 6:
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Chapter 7: Well. That was a nice way to bring everything to a close, and it even had some chuckles in there for good measure.

Epilogue: More adorableness to close out with! Yay!

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That's what happens when ye just let sequels 'appen, matey! Welcome t'me midlife crisis!

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Pleased t'hear it, matey! This ain't yer standard clopfic, no sir!

Eh...dull. More drama than clop. A porn set-up with a great premise and a completely dog shit, weepy execution.

This is like watching a porno where the plumber arrives and the girl sits down and proceeds to sob uncontrollably for 10 minutes, then suck dick.

I want my half hour back.

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Kind of a neat analogue to or way of understanding the dysphoria of trans women, too.

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the fic has a Drama tag and no Porn tag, I dunno what you expected

That thumbnail... haha... well I stole your face

Honestly, I loved it! Doesn't shy away from the sexual stuff (not raunchy, hit that tone just right and none of the genital scenes feel porno), but focuses on character interactions, deployment, and conflict. The flow of the conversations felt a little clunky? a little awkward, a little unpolished, but that just contributes to the Not A Porno tone, so not really a criticism either.

Now, that epilogue? That did feel a little porn-y. Not because of Flutters' last spoken line, but because The Magic of Equestria fucked around with Sunset's genitals and chest and made her a little more fetish-y. But it does make me glad to see that they're supporting each other.

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Someone seemed to have stolen your Starlight avatar pic’s face too.

I couldn't but expect more comedy, even with the absence of the tag, due to the prequel, and less drama even with the tag... But I don't regret reading it. It was both cute and hot, with plausible ramifications.

I imagine though what kinds of kinkyness they got up to while she was still horsey. Likely discovered the pleasures of tight fucking, for one. And I bet Flutters was considering starting stretching enough to make said fucking possible, although that prospect might seem daunting to a teenager.

But I friggin' bet they'll get a horse cock dildo sooner or later. Sunny's bound to feel somewhat homesick eventually - specially now she can receive again, and oh boy Flutters next shopping trip is guaranteed to be for a Strap on -, and let's not delude ourselves on where do the stand on that matter.

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Oh no!

Well, I came for porn, but I got something so much better.

It's thoughtful with sex writing.

Which, generally is my favorite kind of sex writing. It reminds me of a less ridiculous version of the late Mythrilmoth's "Rainbow Dash and the Monster Horse Cock". And yes, the original story is more silly-toned than this one. But they're both good.

Yay for sex things used not just for porn but as a tool for characterization.

I figured it was pony hormones and esterus hitting the girls in the presence of Male pony equipment. It would catch all but Sunset unaware like a rogue wave of alien puberty. As the girls are part pony, it would be their package deal. Sunset needs to explain the facts of life.

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Yeah, there are a crazy number of Clopfics on Fimfiction that are just a human protagonist, or Spike, or a random pony, or even Rudolph the fuckin' Reindeer just having a sex-roulette with with Mane Six.

And its always the same, too! Six chapters, one for each of them, and maybe a prologue or epilogue chapter, with the guy banging them once, each chapter focusing on a different kink, and somehow the protagonist goes through a slight amount of character growth just from the sex and nothing else.

Hell! I remember one fic where the human only managed to bang five of the mane six in six days, and Celestia nearly sent him back to Earth for his failure!

Shits crazy, yo.

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Sunset should go for the faceless look more often. It suits her.

She's faceless to signify how she feels objectified by her friends, and how they're forgetting about her as a person when pursuing her junk.

That was way better than I expected it to be, based purely on the description.

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So, I just saw your comment, and glad I did. I, didn't realize Mythril passed away. I'm, really sad to hear that. I'm glad I know know though.

This got surprisingly real.

Huh. I wonder what the non-con tag's for.

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Plenty o' non-consensual touchin' and exhibition, matey!

Arrrrr, this be a fine haul o’ horse-booty, me hearties!

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I've read a lot of stories with human-on-pony action that were almost ruined, or even entirely ruined, by horsemeat-too-big.

Take the story "Man of War," where this human has a ten inch penis, yet gets made fun of in the Ponyville Spa for it, romances Princess Luna, and then you find out that he hadn't even broken her HYMEN until several lovemaking sessions in when she gives him magic viagra. Even if Luna was twice as big as a regular horse, that wouldn't make sense. I read over 300,000 words into that HiE story only to discover that the crazy well-hung protagonist was incapable of pleasing mares. Had to stop that story there.

There's nothing wrong with turning pony stallions into penis monsters and giving mares vaginas that extend into the ribcage to accommodate said monstrous penises, or making ponies the same size as horses to warrant them having regular-sized horse junk (as long as you mention that in the story), or even writing a scene where Discord uses reality warping to stick his dick in a mare's butt and have it come out her mouth. The sky's the limit with fictional pornography.

Just don't ruin human/pony romance with a lack of research.

There is a very specific image macro I'd like to use here, but I have three hundred and seventy pages of favorites on Derpibooru and I do NOT have the time to hunt it down.

Suffice to say, it is a screenshot from the episode where the girls go to Appleloosa the first or second time, the scene on the train where Applejack is reading a bedtime story to a tree. And in big, Impact font, text, it reads '...and then they fucked. The end.' I'm sure you can appreciate my thought process on the image's appropriateness here on the epilogue.

I have a lot of thoughts on this. More than the last few fics I've read. This was painful the whole way through, but in that good way that tells you this is well crafted and well thought out to be that specific sort of awkward and complicated. Or you just lucked your way into it like I do sometimes. But it was good.

I liked it. I liked it a lot.

Consider my timbers shivered.

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Avatar/Equestria Girls crossover confirmed
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One thing I really like about this fic is that it's not the futa who's a ravenous fuckmonger for once; the others have been reading far too many doujins if they assume that being a girl with a giant ding-diddly-donger means they're horny on main and see everyone as a walking onahole. With my own characters I make, if they're hermaproditic, intersex, or whatever else you wanna call it, that's hardly all there is to them. Sunset already has a bunch of pre-established characterization, but it didn't all just get tossed aside for dick's sake, and that this was more or less the point is refreshing. The premise itself is more serious than the rest of your stuff, but that didn't deter you from still making the story funny where appropriate.

As some of the others have said, yes, the story gets pretty real, and if you ask me, that's a wonderful thing.

Great story. Really nice drama both internal to Sunset and between her and her friends, and the resolution in a lot of ways felt like an episode's, just, you know, with Sunset having an enormous horse schlong and friends handling that poorly rather than something else. On the resolution front, Rainbow was actually a highlight--felt very natural riding the border of poor self expression and not readily getting it and her continuing to push the boundary because there's actually nothing between her thinking something and it reaching her mouth unless someone is there to stop her. That said, I do see some issues with Fluttershy in the last couple chapters which could develop into bad things over time or could be explored in the sequels--or which might amount to nothing or even have been unintended. (The immediate and rapidly repeated "Fluttershy ... her girlfriend" in this epilogue reinforces that impression a bit, especially when it didn't seem to do the same thing the other way, though it's also possible that's just due to moving to Fluttershy's perspective.)

Anyway, very nice work, and glad to start of with something this enjoyable after having been away a while!

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Well, considering that at ten inches he would have at most half the size of a pony's in our world, third of an average horse, and ridiculously small compared to a draft horse, this would certainly make him the target of locker room banter. And I'd rather nitpick about the existence of a hymen in a horse than about the size of equipment needed to break it.

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I just know that an average horse's penis is 22-24 inches (the usable part that actually sticks out), and that ponies are suppose to be less than half as tall as a horse at the shoulder, so proportionally speaking, a pony's junk should only be 11-12 inches, if a pony is one eighth (half height times half length times half width) the size of a horse, at 200lb.

I also know, from vet shows like Dr. Pol, that an average American woman can reach into and touch the back of a full-grown mare's uterus with 3 inches of her forearm in front of the elbow sticking out. That is an ABSOLUTE maximum depth of 14 in, and you can scale that down to 7 in for a 200 lb mare.

And I don't know about the hymen thing, but I don't really want that in my google search history, despite all this other stuff.

Do ponies have longer wangs than humans? Almost certainly, but not to such an extent that human men can't compete.

Hehehehe its soooo cuuute
Great ending btw a true futa.