9726107 You may feel rusty, but after D-Day, I'll just say trust your instincts. Wasn't sure how you'd handle the makeup scene, but you nailed it. Kinda painful to read (as it should be), but not over the top dramatic, and leaves open a proper 'smiles & hugs' makeup for each of the friends (which in turn may or may not include shenanigans, especially the party).
That's gone better than I dared hope. I had some fear of a repeat of the events in Beyond the Looking Glass, but I've never been happier to be wrong. Everypony has been mature and level-headed in these discussion, a pleasure to read.
Now I'm super excited about Rarity's new clothes and the threesome potential of three ponies in the after-hours boutique.
Props to Twilight for pulling a Magical Mistery Cure on Pinkie. That made justice to the especially rude treatment Pinkie received in the previous story.
This story is fantastic. You write these characters so well I definitely find myself looking forward to every chapter... Now if only the other authors whose stories I read would update as frequently as you....
Haven’t read the previous story, and now I don’t think I will. I just don’t believe you’re capable of turning the shitty things Twilight did to her friends into some kind of uplifting journey of personal growth. And why would they forgive her just because she apologized? I mean, she hurt them because she was trying to hurt them. The fact that it was a bet changes very little. Friends don’t make bets where the loser has to be a terrible friend. You’d think the freakin’ Princess of Friendship would know that! I always thought Twilight’s School of Friendship was the shark-jumpingest concept possible (Damned stupid is what it was; just so fucking dumb…), but it seems like Twilight herself could actually use some remedial lessons in common sense friend behavior.
And then Rainbow goes and undermines Twi’s apology to Pinkie by saying the insults were only mostly untrue! What a toxic pony bitch!
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You may feel rusty, but after D-Day, I'll just say trust your instincts. Wasn't sure how you'd handle the makeup scene, but you nailed it. Kinda painful to read (as it should be), but not over the top dramatic, and leaves open a proper 'smiles & hugs' makeup for each of the friends (which in turn may or may not include shenanigans, especially the party).
Poor Spike being thrown out for no reason. Spike is not that much younger than them he is a teenager at the least.
Yay chapter
That's gone better than I dared hope. I had some fear of a repeat of the events in Beyond the Looking Glass, but I've never been happier to be wrong. Everypony has been mature and level-headed in these discussion, a pleasure to read.
Now I'm super excited about Rarity's new clothes and the threesome potential of three ponies in the after-hours boutique.
Props to Twilight for pulling a Magical Mistery Cure on Pinkie. That made justice to the especially rude treatment Pinkie received in the previous story.
Awesome chapter!
This story is fantastic. You write these characters so well I definitely find myself looking forward to every chapter... Now if only the other authors whose stories I read would update as frequently as you....
Of course the prim and proper lady is a freak....never change rares.
Haven’t read the previous story, and now I don’t think I will. I just don’t believe you’re capable of turning the shitty things Twilight did to her friends into some kind of uplifting journey of personal growth. And why would they forgive her just because she apologized? I mean, she hurt them because she was trying to hurt them. The fact that it was a bet changes very little. Friends don’t make bets where the loser has to be a terrible friend. You’d think the freakin’ Princess of Friendship would know that! I always thought Twilight’s School of Friendship was the shark-jumpingest concept possible (Damned stupid is what it was; just so fucking dumb…), but it seems like Twilight herself could actually use some remedial lessons in common sense friend behavior.
And then Rainbow goes and undermines Twi’s apology to Pinkie by saying the insults were only mostly untrue! What a toxic pony bitch!
I do like this story but I could really do without the unnecessary drama. Just makes Twilight and Rainbow look like assholes.