I love that Twilight has a way of getting comfortable that’s uniquely her own and that her partners second and encourage her in indulging it. Rainbow keeps on surprising me, this time as an attentive student, where will she go next? The possibilities are endless.
Something that stood out to me has been Cadance’s morale at the end of the chapter. It’s somehow both imposing and humbling; simple, yet terrifically effective. Summing up what they’ve learned in their latest experience brings back a nostalgic tear of season 1’s friendship reports.
I can’t tell if there’s some teasing for diapers in the coming chapters of if it’s just an excuse to make Rainbow uncomfortable. Hmm...
Holy crap. This suddenly appeared on my recommended side-bar; I had no clue why, but on a whim I clicked it, and see its' the sequel to one of my all time favorite old stories (always found stuff from 2015 & prior to be very lacking, with a few notable exceptions, and 'Bad Girl Twilight' is one of them). Haven't read a word yet, just thrilled to see this. Added to my library, looking forward to shenanigans & payback. Edit: Found 1 typo. 'Chapter 4- Walk up the stars', I suspect it should be 'stairs'.
9723187 If Cadance has her own school, surely all of her students love her. Would Shining be OK with it? Would the crystal ponies? Would she even care? Maybe she could also teach to other species how ponies love each other.
Celestia has been Twilight's confident for all the things, not just friendship. I wouldn't be surprised if she got some M rated reports. She's so good to her little ponies I can't see her fapping to one's confidences; I imagine her genuinely trying to help the sender in her motherly ways. Celestia must understand the need for privacy of all her reports, not only the M rated ones. They shall be protected with the most powerful wards to keep them from prying eyes
Finished reading, and I gotta say; my absolute favorite thing here is how consistent your writing style is. You perfectly balance story/plot development, clop scenes, and humor. Just like in the original. Really looking forward to seeing more :)
9726087 Honestly with the three year gap I was a bit worried. I definitely feel rusty, especially as I now lack the support structure I used to have (co-writers/dedicated editors/pre-readers/etc...)
Thank you for the compliment though. I'm beyond thrilled that it's turned out as well as it has and that the reception has been so positive. It's a pleasure to be back :)
Yay chapter
I love that Twilight has a way of getting comfortable that’s uniquely her own and that her partners second and encourage her in indulging it. Rainbow keeps on surprising me, this time as an attentive student, where will she go next? The possibilities are endless.
Something that stood out to me has been Cadance’s morale at the end of the chapter. It’s somehow both imposing and humbling; simple, yet terrifically effective. Summing up what they’ve learned in their latest experience brings back a nostalgic tear of season 1’s friendship reports.
I can’t tell if there’s some teasing for diapers in the coming chapters of if it’s just an excuse to make Rainbow uncomfortable. Hmm...
Holy crap. This suddenly appeared on my recommended side-bar; I had no clue why, but on a whim I clicked it, and see its' the sequel to one of my all time favorite old stories (always found stuff from 2015 & prior to be very lacking, with a few notable exceptions, and 'Bad Girl Twilight' is one of them). Haven't read a word yet, just thrilled to see this. Added to my library, looking forward to shenanigans & payback.
Edit: Found 1 typo. 'Chapter 4- Walk up the stars', I suspect it should be 'stairs'.
Brilliant chapter :D
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Corrected. Thank you.
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Should Cadence should have a school too?
I wonder if Celestia ever got "love reports" on a regular basis. If she did they're probably bound into a book hidden under the mattress lol.
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If Cadance has her own school, surely all of her students love her. Would Shining be OK with it? Would the crystal ponies? Would she even care? Maybe she could also teach to other species how ponies love each other.
Celestia has been Twilight's confident for all the things, not just friendship. I wouldn't be surprised if she got some M rated reports. She's so good to her little ponies I can't see her fapping to one's confidences; I imagine her genuinely trying to help the sender in her motherly ways. Celestia must understand the need for privacy of all her reports, not only the M rated ones. They shall be protected with the most powerful wards to keep them from prying eyes
Finished reading, and I gotta say; my absolute favorite thing here is how consistent your writing style is. You perfectly balance story/plot development, clop scenes, and humor. Just like in the original. Really looking forward to seeing more :)
9726087
Honestly with the three year gap I was a bit worried. I definitely feel rusty, especially as I now lack the support structure I used to have (co-writers/dedicated editors/pre-readers/etc...)
Thank you for the compliment though. I'm beyond thrilled that it's turned out as well as it has and that the reception has been so positive. It's a pleasure to be back :)
I am really enjoying the pacing of this. It gives the feeling that a lot more chapters are coming. I also really like this interpretation of Cadence.
Yoo!! So happy that you went and wrote a sequel for this. Havent read in years and had not found any good new stories. This is by far the best!!