A wacky story of what happens when our little purple friend does in the library when Twilight isn't around!
It's been a while FimFiction...but I'm back! Look for the third chapter next weekend.
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~HondaRider92
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This 'story' felt like an Adam Sandler movie. It may try a few times, but mostly it just wallows in its own conjured up loathsomeness.
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Wajushapen?!
Loved it.
I loled so hard at the letter. Man, Spike makes the perfect stoner buddy
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Whist ill take all help and criticism into effect, I will not make a personal attack upon your comment. This is meant to get a laugh out of someone and I realize that its not for everyone. However you might want to leave something a little more constructive on what I did wrong in your eyes. Pull a specific example instead of going saying something vague and doesn't seem to make a whole lot of sense..."This 'story' felt like an Adam Sandler movie. It may try a few times, but mostly it just wallows in its own conjured up loathsomeness." Please break that down for me because I'm gonna be honest it sounds like spewn hot air..and Have you ever seen Happy Gilmore? Without a doubt one of the keepers...along with The Waterboy, and a few others...so Your Adam Sandler reference doesn't make sense to me either. I have read some shady stories on here that got less criticism and I'm alright with that, but if you are gonna critique my work, at least have something to back up your statement, pull something specific from the story so I can learn what people like better so I can better my abilities as a writer, thats how positive criticism works...not just spewing out a few garbage thoughts just because you didn't like something and you wanted to jump on the Adam Sandler band wagon..i've seen that multiple times and it's getting old. Again this isn't a personal attack, this is me responding in a proper matter, may you be educated somewhat of how criticism goes down and how both parties will better from it.
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I apologize.
I usually do try to offer criticism for stories, believe me, but then there's a that one comment that I make that I end up regretting a few hours or so after I make it. None of that was a personal attack, just me admittedly venting my frustration in a manner both immature and unacceptable.
So yeah, I like this... I like this a lot. Now please ship Spike wit- *Gets tackled by other self*
Sorry, I just love me some Spike shipfics... Anyway, yeah I found this story utterly awesome and hilarious it made me giggle and have smiles all over. I wish you the absolute best and I will be watching you now with much interest.
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Apology accepted friend, stick around I'll have allot of stuff here coming up in the next month or so, as I said before I look forward to criticism because its a way to better my writing, and its much more gratifying and humbling when I can appeal to a larger crowd. Criticism means that someone cares enough to really sit down, read, and point out flaws and help me make my stories even better!
as for everyone else thanks for the positive comments
I'm glad you guys are liking my writing so far haha! quick question what is shipping? not too sure about it, I've seen people say it but I don't know exactly what it means lol
~HondaRider92
I thought this was rather hilarious
Dude this is my type of story. Nothing funnier then reading about pastel colored ponies getting blown out of their skulls.
And shipping is when you pair characters up. ex.RarityxSpike = shipping.