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Sirdubya


I'm just a wandering writer looking to impress people with my creativity, and improve it with feedback from you!

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"Legends are for foals", they say, but Applebloom hopes with all her heart that a certain legend is real for the sake of her family when Sweet Apple Acres experiences a sudden spell of infertility. How futile is it to wish upon a bedtime story?

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you know... she could plant an apple tree near the river for it.

also, so much potential. loved this anyways tho. good work

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Thanks!
And thanks for the fave!

I I love it

9662989
Thank you!
And thanks for favoriting!

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Think we could get a story or chapter from Xerneas pov?

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Interesting idea. I’d have to think about how that’d be conveyed.

9676051
I would be happy to assist if you need it

I would love to see a sequel on this story

I like it when legendaries don’t talk. It makes them seem more mysterious, yet intelligent.

Also, I know the Great Seedling is Xerneas, but that name makes me think of Ever Oasis.

Comment posted by ShadowSpectrumSwordtails deleted Dec 24th, 2020

9676051
I just wanted to say that you nailed Xerneas. The legendary fairy pokemon is a perfect fit for the Great Seedling. Truly a perfect fit for an awesome story.

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Thank you!
When I saw that episode, Xerneas immediately came to mind, and I just had to do this flash fic.

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You welcome, in fact. There’s a couple of idea I’ve had from this fic that I was hoping you’d consider. The first is. What if during a sequel to this. An injured Xerneas met Flutters within Sweet Feather Sanctuary and she being the element of kindness did all she could to heal the Fairy pokemon and with her having a way to understand various creatures had a talk with Xerneas while it healed. Personally I feel like those two would hit it off. Don’t you?
As for the second fic idea, what if one night in the Crystal empire Cadence finds Flurry Heart playing with a Mega Diancie. Who through telepathy tells the tale about how it was who helped to forge the Crystal heart.
Like I said these are just some story ideas that this fic inspired that I was hoping you’d consider. So, what do yah think?

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The first idea sounds like a great beginning to a bigger story if you’re ambitious enough. Otherwise, it’s a wholesome slice of life!

The second idea sounds like it’s got the right themes in place, but maybe try telling it through Flurry’s eyes? Diancie is telepathically talking to her after all. Although, I wouldn’t have it go Mega right away. Maybe after a big event that happens?

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Like when the Crystal heart go off from all the happiness of the Crystal ponies cause they quickly recognized Diancie and were over joyed to see the best friend of previous ruler after so many years. Cause in that version I see the Crystal heart being Diancie’s mega stone. Which would help tie in to the story of how Diance helped to create it alongside the previous ruler of the empire.

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Then with your permission, I’d like to crafts a couple of stories based in the world for this one. Of course giving credit to you for inspiring me. What do ya say?

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You have my... <ahem> Blessing!:moustache:

Let me know how it comes out!

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