"... okay, I have another plan!"
This story is a sequel to The Tournament Of Friendship
While the Rainbooms are busy performing in the Friendship Games, the Dazzlings are off to find a special cure to undo what Sunset Shimmer has done. But their trip ends up taking a little detour... into an old place they had once called home...
Spin-off story of Tournament Of Friendship. Special thanks to Scholarly Cimmerian for the idea.
Does not require reading of previous story to understand this one.
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Princess Trixie, Princess of Humility
Looking forward to more!
Good start! XD
Nice chapter. I really got a kick out of Aria and Adagio in this chapter - plus Sonata actually being the more reasonable of them for once. XD
Have they survived anything else, like... the Battle of the Bands?
Is Adagio emulating Sonata when she sees a taco truck?
One typo. Sonata should be getting out of the "lake," not the "like". XD
That said, this was a fun chapter. Glad to see Princess Celestia appear here. Interesting to see her taking an active role in travelling Equestria - though if in this AU it's Luna who's the major ruler of Equestria, I guess that Tia then has a role of "protector of the day" like how Canon-Luna was a "protector of the night" or something. XD
Also, the bit with Zecora helping out was fun. As was Aria's indignation with Dagi.
You have my attention!
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So the Sirens are back to their original home, Equestria!
Wonder what's gonna happen next?
Finally caught up and I really like this story. The part at the end with Adagio and Aria was really funny!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
RIP HIS BEARD OFF!!!
This was really good stuff. I enjoyed seeing the Dazzlings' arrival in Canterlot, and their interactions with some of its inhabitants - great to see Fancy Pants in particular, he's always awesome.
Although that cliffhanger... ooh boy. There is gonna be sparks flying real soon...
Adagio to Starswhirl: You self-centered IDIOT! It took you going to Limbo to even THINK you might actually be wrong about something. If I could, I would show you the horrors that you made my sisters and I experience. Horrors that nopony could have imagined.
Oh boy... considering what Starswirl did to the Dazzlings from A Shattered Rainbow Rocks, the reunion between them is going to be really... ugly!
Hmm. Is Daybreaker separate from Celestia?
Who tried to bring her back?
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In the words of Nora, "We'll brake his legs!"
Anger, or perhaps hatred would be a better word, is a very dangerous thing. If it gets a hold of you, at least in my opinion, it can be a very poisonous thing. Eating away at you, hurting you, leaving you exhausted and full of regret when it's later, sometimes too late to make things better. Starswirl is a damned good example of that in my opinion. He's just... kind of half dead already. Definitely not *living* to say the least. Thank goodness that Adagio had her sisters with her!
Also, that ending... excellent work on that conclusion, Four. It's heartbreaking in all the right ways.
Dang... that was a heavy chapter!
Well that’s dark. Scorpan used Star Swirl to kill Tirek and ruled his kingdom with an iron claw and worst of all; Star Swirl blamed himself and hurt innocent creatures and Stygian who became the Pony of Corrupted Light. (That’s my idea for the AU Pony of Shadows)
Will Chrysalis be the Element of Love?
You mean "tear"?
Adagio has kids?
Anyway, very good chapter! I'm glad that the Dazzlings are feeling better now and having fun after that last chapter!
Good work with this chapter, it was a solid mix of drama and heartwarming. The ending in particular was really sweet.
Are the Dazzlings going to pay another visit to Starswirl? Perhaps not to forgive, but maybe to try to pull him out of his downward spiral? If their last encounter with him was left on such a bitter note it might not sit well with them after they leave.
The music really added a lot of punch to that concluding scene. Excellent choice, Four.
Solid work all around. You had a nice mix of sweet and slice-of-life stuff, and then some good continuation of the drama from earlier on too. And maybe even something of a new beginning for Starswirl too?
Another great chapter!
Of course it was Sonata who have the heart to forgive Starswirl. While he wasn't completely moved on from his mistakes, but it's a start at least.
Excellent job with your story! It was a fun read!
Looking forward to your next project!
This was a nice way to conclude the story. After the high drama in some of the earlier chapters, a simple bit of slice-of-life at the very end is a good way to wind things down. ^_^
And thank you for letting me contribute to this work, Four.
Is that Pride Rock in the background?
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Nu, silly. :3
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It's actually Canterlot, I just observed that now. It almost looked like Pride Rock at a glance.
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hehe.
Who was the pony who released Day Breaker?
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That was somethin' I wanted to keep up in the air, since I have yet to actually make a legit 'pilot' or prequel to this that actually shows how the ponies all got together so decision for the unicorn in that place hasn't been chosen.