There was a razor edge to Luna’s tone but I would let it cut if it did. “Because I’m not having any for the next oh, ten thousand years or so.” luan looked at me pissed then threw her cup at my head. “Why do you even care? It's not like you two want me around here anyways.” She stopped as she looked at me then looked down to the ground quiet.
I smiled as I looked down at her as her mother and father yelled at her to keep her mouth shut. I laughed as I looked down at her as she looked at me annoyed. “Trust me before Gleaming before it’s over you’ll come and ask me to train you.” She looked at me with a deep frown on her face as she looked at me. I jumped off of Chastiefol then it turned back into spear form and I opened a dark hole on my back it flew into my darkness. Once it was in my body and the nobles dealt with me and the Princess walked into the gardens. The maids bought us tea and sweets and Celestia put on the boar hat outfit. I smiled as I looked at her red face as she glared at me.
I think that here are missed a few parragrafh and one image of the Boar Hat set.
Me reí un poco mientras frotaba su melena. "Lo sé y lamento haberte molestado así". Apoyó la cabeza en mi hombro y luego se puso rígida cuando miró hacia otro lado. Giré la cabeza y me congelé mientras miraba a todas las chicas que comenzaban a mirarnos. "Fóllame".
PP: Okie dokie loky! *gets undressed and over the bed in a zettasecond*
Pinkie
thumbs up for yes
thumbs down no for no
Applejack
thumbs up for yes
thumbs down no for no
Rainbow Dash
thumbs up for yes
thumbs down no for no
Twilight
thumbs up for yes
thumbs down no for no
Edit: die
Also a few I's were left uncapitalized
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rly, you're asking that here, well the answer is obviously going the issai way of haram king
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I'm with you on that one
I think you might want it to be luna not luan
Great story but I would like the chapters to be a bit longer please.
I hope Celestia falls for him and wants his baby's.
The time or the royal orgy is at hand... May Snu-Snu commence! ♡
I think that here are missed a few parragrafh and one image of the Boar Hat set.
PP: Okie dokie loky! *gets undressed and over the bed in a zettasecond*