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Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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This story is a sequel to The Letter


Rainbow Dash makes it through the ceremony but she can't handle seeing Applejack with Rarity, the woman if her dreams. So she escapes to the dressing room to have a breakdown. She gets support from an unexpected source.


Note about the prequel, it's mature, but that's only because it uses profanity over a small stretch if that doesn't bother you it's still a good read. But all you need to know from the prequel that RD is in love with Rarity.

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Comments ( 15 )

I like this story better than the other one because the ending's happy :scootangel:

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Hehe, I was quite literally going "Should I...? Should I not...? Should I...?" And I ended up going "aww heck, throw them a bone."

:derpyderp2: I don't know if I like this or not. It was interesting though.

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Hehe, I know it would have gotten more upvotes if I hadn't done the romance thing but I was like "Hm... I can see it happening, let's give it at least some happy!"

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Why would you write this and not tell me? It’s like you haven’t even seen my best ship corner on my profile page.

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Whoops! My bad! *Though I totally hadn't seen it. :D*

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There, corrected.

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I meant look at the Best Ship Corner, but thank you for the PM

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I realized you probably meant that after I sent it, but those are naughty pictures! And adorable ones.

I totes expect a sequel.

Rainbow Dash flinched slightly as she was reminded that she'd done that, though by accident. But Rainbow Dash understood that Sweetie Belle was using it metaphorically not to admonish Rainbow Dash.

I don’t understand the metaphor.

Also, some of the things in the story was a little confusing.

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In tgis reality Sweetie Belle has some disease that makes her weak and easily hurt. So she's used to physical pain. That's how she's using "I'm used to it."

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Oct 14th, 2020

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Also, you mind checking the grammar? Because, I think there are some things that make it a little confusing.

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