• Member Since 10th Nov, 2017
  • offline last seen 5 hours ago

Shadowflameking


What fun is there in making sense? -Discord, Lord Of Chaos.

Comments ( 18 )

So what happened to the Mane 6, Cadance and Shining after all this time, also what will happen to Liberty Prime now that the Changelings are taken care of?

9617374
its a one shot, who knows? thats left up to the reader to decide, unless I choose to make this more than one chapter, which is very unlikely

I wonder what Liberty Prime thinks of Monarchy?

And is Equestria a Constitutional Monarchy or an absolute one? Do the nobles actually form part of the government, or are they just vestigial?

We know Ponyville seems to be democracy, with an elected mayor, which is presumably a relic of the pre-unification Earth pony government, but how universal is it?

9617544
I'd say 60 40, celestia is the 60, nobles are the 40, they have say in things like taxation, of things like exports, trades, etcetc, while celestia controls the laws

9617548 Uh oh.

"Embrace Democracy or Perish!"

"Death is a preferable alternative to communism!"

I've waited too long to see something like this. Liberty Prime all the way!

"Initiating directive 7395 -- destroy all Communists." Liberty Prime's shoulders opened up, and small missiles shot out in the dozens, changelings that had been trying to dive bomb Prime, where shot out of the sky like the dirty bugs they where, when there was only twenty changelings left, they retreated, using the hive mind to inform their Queen what had happened, and to prepare for a defense against the metal giant, however, they didn't get to far as Liberty Prime took them out of the sky using his head laser, he was not just going to let an enemy combatant get away.

1.
please use more periods, each paragraph is a really long sentence :c

2.
I'm offended, how dare you call them "dirty bugs"! I'm sure they shower. My changeling does!

The story was okay.


The only issue I had was with the ending. Changelings don't just enter a comatose state if they're cut off from the hive mind. Sure, they'll be confused, but not sent into a coma.

9618093
chill, I am going off hivemind logic in this story, certain species, in scifi movies, need a queen to control them, otherwise they just roll over and die, I am going off that logic, no offence to changelings, I love em, you know that lol I have 5 changeling characters to rp as XD

9618141
trust me, i was not offended, just wanted to point out my thoughts c:

and the ponies who had not attacked it, where allied forces of America.

You're using "where" wrong. "Where" is a place or position.

Example: "Where is my lube?"

The word you're looking for is were. “Were” is simply a plural past-tense form of the verb “are.”

Example: "The ponies were now friends with the United States."

Login or register to comment