When a strange stallion comes to Rarity for help, catching her eye with an intriguing device and an unsolved murder, she drops her work and embarks on a journey of mystery, magic and treachery, uncovering the dark and dangerous goings on of Manehattan.
Follow along as she tells the tales of her adventures through her trusty typewriter.
This is a cool start, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Very good start! The story flows nicely, the descriptions are sufficient and the atmosphere is intriguing. Noticed some grammatical errors here and there, but that’s just a minor complaint of mine. It is clear to see you have enjoyed writing this, and I hope the upcoming chapters are going to be just as good!
I like this.
Interesting start.