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This is pefect.
I love it and want more.
casualty
glowing
thought the cute
spasm, perhaps?
Double word! X3x
Yeah, but the same can be said of Nightmare Moon.
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I have nothing more to say than that this story gets the full 10 points. Long life to the queen of the Sphinxes.
these*
Interesting begin
Cursed? Sound more like a blessed pyadmid
Is this Pyramid a birth place for Sphinx?
So they accept to help and get robbed of there personality... why not simply add stuff... that sad...
I have mixed feeling about this
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Most people tend to. Don't worry! Just means that the adventures of C.F. and her wife S.T. Will finally end with them and a home, with raising a family on top of that.
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Awwwww~ Thank ye! <3
Since these aren't my characters, I don't have any say in that! But you'll definitely get more stories~! :3
9595984
WOW! Totally huge thankyes! And don't worry, she'll live plenty long~! :3 :3 :3
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And maybe a new Empire or something like that~
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Exactly! After all, isn't Nightmare Night about giving candy to NMM so she doesn't gobble up wee little foals~? The other part of this was me wanting to address the mythology of the Sphinx devouring her prey. Ain't my cup of tea and I didn't want to go down that road!
I wanted a MUCH more fun road~!
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That's the idea! They're ancestral home~!
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Blessed in all the right ways~! :3
Seriously, I want that fountain in my backyard. Sphinx statue optional! :3
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I would like to see what you could do with other mythological creatures that aren't specifically canon or referenced in MLP.
Things like the Dochar-chú, for example, could prove interesting.
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I've actually never heard of that before, but I've done lots of mythological stuff in the past~
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Irish mythology.
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Oooh. That looks like an angry violent beastie! I'm really not sure what I could do with that since I don't often play with the super predatory-types! Even the Sphinx, as you can see, I turned into something a lot more sensual!
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Doesn't mean that you can't do something similar with the King Otter.
After all, you addressed the reason for changing the Sphinx from aggressive to sensual.
Perhaps it's the last of its kind, and needs a mate?
I don't know. I'm just throwing Ideas at the wall and seeing what sticks.
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That's a really good point~! If you wanna commission me for that, I might be willing to give it a go! I'd have to do some more homework though. I need to know my stuff before I can create a really good story! Send me a PM! :3
<3
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Tempting, but I don't get paid until next week, and will likely have forgotten by then.
Still, at least I can leave the idea with you, and if you choose to follow through, then that's grand, and if not, I will likely forget.
Loved the story. I always enjoy a good, slow mental corruption. Only complaint about it is that the changes lack detail.
I was a little surprised that their memories still changed entirely despite resisting and solving the riddle. This didn't feel much different from the 'failure' option. Have to agree on having mixed feelings, but hey, different strokes for different folks.
That said, the combination of physical and mental changes was very well written. While normally I'm all for having all the detail and description I can get in a physical transformation, leaving gaps was kind of the point here. In the vast majority of TF art and stories the main focus beyond the TF itself is the subject's reaction. I love (and rarely see) scenarios that are about a lack thereof. The mental changes mean they don't notice all of the physical changes as they happen, and the reader sees the progression much as they do. Nicely done!
And hey, congrats on the feature!
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Well, they got a choice if they succeeded, and they chose to be changed instead of escaping.
I read that in the voice of a Neanderthal Caveman.
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Rather dark end... but i guess it not without its benefits
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Beats living a normal life. But its sad they needed to be twisted into it without having a chance going it there way...
I hope there’s more like this to come
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I totally agree the synxs want to be accepted in the world but yet their first act is to essentially kill two ponies who only wants to help bring their race to existence once more, I think if they were told that they personalities and memories of loved ones would be completely obliterated I don't think they would have been so willing to accept.
I don't think pony is a going to be willing to accept them because they know nothing about each other's cultures, another reason that the synxss shouldn't have wiped their memories.
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Yep... They dont seems to learn from there mistakes and doom there chances to repopulate repeatly
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Thank you sooooo much~!
I'm so glad you loved the TFs! Mental transformations are usually a ton more fun for me~! It's sexier to alter thoughts than bodies and even better as reality is sort of rewritten so they hesitate and go "Wait a sec" then another change hits and they can't even remember what they were just thinking. After all, to them, nothing changed~! The reader has a TOTALLY different look though, so it's super fun to play those against one another! :3
Thank you hun~!
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Oh yes. Not necessarily sphinx-related, but plenty more~! :3
Nice foreshadowing.
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Heeeee~ I like lampshades sometimes~!
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Ok, who’s the spoilsport that disliked your comment?
I wanna see opal hands!
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Meh... Everyone has a vote and since i get no explained why im negativ/wrong or whatever i think its a troll
The slow, detailed transition of the two into the absolute rulers of their land is well written, and Twist and Courage will definitely enjoy the rest of their sexy lives. This was really fun to read! Great job!
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Thank you, sweetheart~! You're comments are so wonderful~! And yes, they'll definitely be good and kind rulers... even if their subjects don't understand that entirely until they're underneath their new Queens~!
The world needs more sphinx transformation. Imagine all the cute kitty ponies with those sexy large paws pleasing each other~
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Don't forget the rough tongue~! It can do ALL SORTS of fun things~!
Continue the story
Good story