Liking the Fic so far! But when Gallus talks to him self, it just Seems a little strange? A bit too descriptive to be talking out loud to himself.
It would prolly be better off as his thoughts rather then him speaking out loud. Cause personally when I talk to myself, it's not full sentences, half of it is thoughs, but that would be even stranger and difficult to type out coherently.
Liking the Fic so far! But when Gallus talks to him self, it just Seems a little strange? A bit too descriptive to be talking out loud to himself.
It would prolly be better off as his thoughts rather then him speaking out loud. Cause personally when I talk to myself, it's not full sentences, half of it is thoughs, but that would be even stranger and difficult to type out coherently.