Second chapter didn't disappoint. More great writing and more unexpected twists. Freakin' love ya!

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Thank you. It was all about hilarious distortion of expectation and ignorance. And Angel and Opal being a decadent jerk couple with a heart of gold.

Dahaha I loved the unexpected gentleman Gummy!

Whenever I read Angel's dialogue, sometimes he has a British accent, and sometimes he has a young, American one. I've been driving myself crazy throughout the whole thing.

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So in your mind he flips between a chav and a guido?

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Something like that.

In my mind, I almost expected Opal to say at some point "What the fuck is wrong with your voice? Pick a damn accent and stay with it!"

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Strange. I never really noticed his dialogue being especially... British. it was always a somewhat generic not-quite-New-York or something. Like a lighter version og John Enos on World's Dumbest.

Next chapter, Angel'll be making pudding at 4am. It's weird to say this, but poor Angel, he just wants to get laid.

Another wonderful chapter, though it does sorely lack for dirty jokes. Winona and Gummy already dating was a great twist to a situation I had initially called (knew it'd be Gummy). Then you make him Dapper Gummy, alligator of the immense intellect, which reminded me a lot of Fluttershy's Bad Hare Day, but different.

I was with Angel in worrying about AB's 'special herbs', who knows what Zecora's growing out in the woods.

Regarding accents, I hear Angel with a Bronx accent and Gummy with a very proper British one; Opal and Winona are the same as their owners, maybe a bit exaggerated.

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I had Opal pegged as "Rarity with more snark" and Winona as "Not very accented country gal". So, you're right there. And on with Angel as well. Gummy... could be anything as long as he sounds classy. he is, after all, a dapper fellow.

Next chapter talks about the missing two pets.

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In my head, Winona is a mix of AJ and Pinkie, so the accent is light just due to the speed; any heavier and you wouldn't be able to understand her.

Oh, forgot to add Gummy, the Big Mac of alligators.

I had a feeling this plan of Opal and Angel's would come back to bite them, but I didn't think it would so quickly...or in quite this manner.

Consider me herp-a-derpped.

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Anyone who has known me for a while knows I am big on Gummy/Winona. I wasn't even necessarily thinking Angel/Opal until I compared them to toher couples I like (Trixie/Gilda and Diamond Tiara/Silver Spoon) and realized I have a knack for making jerks less jerky by putting them together. The big reveal was always going to be that Gummy and Winona have been in love forever. The trick was to make it extra funny. By breaking the joke Angel and Opal were trying to play I just made it that much more funny. What they thought was the most impossible match is actually one that has been present longer than their own.

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Oh, and I wanted to add, the "dirty jokes" in this chapter come from the reiteration of the "noodle implements" from last chapter, and the implication of how they will be used for kinky happy sexy fun time.

"eating cherries out of the bowl he was expecting this weekend.” <-----Oddest euphemism I have ever seen. But still pretty cute but really it's Opal with winnona and gummy with the flower bag, and angle is trying to get flutters. Anyway good to see more of your work.

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Sorry, I just couldn't follow the second half of your comment about the flower bag and flutters.

And that's not quite a euphemism. As implied by the "noodle implements" he indends to... Well, we'll leave that alone.

Daaaaaamn, I can't... wow, man, you hit the bottom of the barrel when it came to pairings, didn't you? This... this is not what I was expecting, lol.

You mean they had sex? (Went to town)

I still want a story about winona and gummy when they start dating!