To die for our Land is the highest honor

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To die for our Land is the highest honor

As the war against Equestria rages on, Tank Commander Chitin of the 45th Panzer Division is part of the daring operation; Fall Küste. A mission to strike at the south of the Equestrian homeland itself. While safer than the north, the Changelings may soon find themselves having more troubles than they bargained for, and if that’s the case, then Chitin must use everything at his disposal to get him and his crew home.

Written for the 2nd EaW contest

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FallBlau

FallBlau #1 · Mar 24th, 2019 · 3 · ·

I really liked this story!

As a huge player of the Equestria at War mod, I absolutely love a story from the perspective of the Changelings. Especially the Panzer troops. lol

The dialouge was curt and military-like, the places realistic, and especially the premise, were all superb.

I feel like the characterization was a bit lacking though. It feels a bit...rushed? I think this story could greatly benefit from really fleshing out these characters and making them more rounded - desires, hopes, fears, etc.

Overall, a good story. I hope to read more!