You may want to include a status message about if or if not you'll be meeting other Displaced. That way people won't ask you about it if you're readdy or if you're planning to keep your story pure of cross-overs.
Hmmm... you’ve got my interest. I’ll admit that I’m not too familiar with wh40k, so some of the down side is I have to imagine your character based on limited knowledge. Aside from that, I hope to see more of this as it has a feeling of potential. :)
Just a heads up, in response to the author’s note, a child would not relax in the presence of a stranger if having a nightmare. The reason people or in this case ponies relax in nightmares when being held is both a combination of being held and the presence of something comforting that they recognise. In animals it’s more so scents and warmth, which given these are ponies and still have the same equine senses, means that Harvest would not relax.
9495563 Self inserts are the easiest way to learn writing, as it means you do not have to create a character or copy another. You know yourself and you can judge how you’d act in a situation, easy,
ah, a necron fic...
may your arrows be swift and true, honored one
Warning: TECH HERESY DETECTED TECH HERESY DETECTED TECH HERESY DETECTED!
You may want to include a status message about if or if not you'll be meeting other Displaced. That way people won't ask you about it if you're readdy or if you're planning to keep your story pure of cross-overs.
Dat dere iz sum good riten ya got dere tin'ead. Keep up da good WAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHK.
Frum
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This is getting me harder then terminator armor
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I know. Despairing, isn't it?
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(Maybe, if you were referring to this story being another of the countless blatant, one-dimensional self-inserts. If not, ignore me haha)
Hmmm... you’ve got my interest. I’ll admit that I’m not too familiar with wh40k, so some of the down side is I have to imagine your character based on limited knowledge. Aside from that, I hope to see more of this as it has a feeling of potential. :)
More please
Give moar
More
A very... typical beginning, but still.
Some of the best fics have the same sort of beginnings.
9495563 It's just someone trying to grow their skills. Give them some slack.
Just a heads up, in response to the author’s note, a child would not relax in the presence of a stranger if having a nightmare. The reason people or in this case ponies relax in nightmares when being held is both a combination of being held and the presence of something comforting that they recognise. In animals it’s more so scents and warmth, which given these are ponies and still have the same equine senses, means that Harvest would not relax.
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Self inserts are the easiest way to learn writing, as it means you do not have to create a character or copy another. You know yourself and you can judge how you’d act in a situation, easy,
I feel like there's a hidden rule for if you see the merchant from RE4 you run
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What the hell is your profile pic?
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I think I'll tell you, it mix of rainbow, ww2 germanish and ww2 sovietish that's if you meant WHAT his picture was, anything else idk