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The Brightest Star

Princess Twilight had always been one of the brightest stars. A star pupil under Princess Celestia, the savior of Equestria, the knowledgeable bookworm of a friend...

But even the brightest stars can't escape their lingering darkness.

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TheOneAJ

TheOneAJ #1 · Mar 7th, 2019 · · ·

I enjoyed :)
The writing grammar and pacing was actually pretty good.
The story, For a one-shot (if you have no plans to expand on in the future) hit all the right notes... some personal to me actually
Although; was this a personal type story for you? Based on own experience? Slight difference in review of something based more on personal stuff ^^’ and just my own tastes in stories about depression/dealing
Still great job 👍