Rarity is in despair. She's ready to swoon onto the nearest fainting couch. She's convinced that she's OLD. Even though she's only 30. But she does have a BAD heat. And she doesn't have a handy stallion to help. Maybe a dragon will do?
Damn, CitC, you're on a ROLL lately. That Apogee collab was fantastic enough, but this one hits my 'favorite paring' button too! And based off that wonderful TJP art? Instant read, instant favorite.
One criticism:
“R-rarrriteeeeee!!!!” Spike groaned out, his hips humping into the air, cock pulsing and spearing at an imaginary target. A thick bulge raced up his shaft
She knew where the next blast would land, and for a moment she hesitated. But she knew how much it would mean to the drake… and bathing in this wonderfully sweet spunk was not so bad the more she thought about it.
Seems like there's anywhere from half a sentence to half a paragraph missing here. Lost in editing maybe?
Otherwise I can't complain about this at all. Bravo, man, I'd love to see more Sparity from you. --CG
“Spike!” Sweetie scolded. “I told you to give her the full dragon experience! Half the fun of your ‘little spike’ is how well it works up the tailhole!”
When did Sweetie say the Full experience did she mean that Spike had "Two" instead of "one"? or she meant another thing?
Got to the fic, started reading, "Hmm that's really nice writing" Like and Fav on the first chapter Then notice in the comment section WHO is purple ^^;;;
She felt her tongue roll out of her mouth, as the energy boiled up the base of her horn, exploding out the top with a shower of sparking electricity, completely out of her control.
I can see this going a lot farther than just what is current. Sweetie DOMINATING her big sister while Spike is obeying Sweetie's every command?! THAT would make a great extension to this fic!
Rarity’s nostrils flared and snuffled as she took a hearty whiff. That smokey campfire musk was now overpowering, setting off thousands of receptor cells in her olfactory senses, setting her heart and mind aflame. That clear coating now looked irresistible, delectable… A small squirt slipped from his slit and from under his ridges, sliding down the outside of his shaft… how could she resist?
: "I assure you: She can't. No mare can."
This was no time to be a gentle lady. Right now, she was a mare. And a horny mare at that.
I approve.
Rarity yelped slightly as the dragon easily picked her up from under her hips and chest, carrying her (still rubbing his cock across her back) over to a small table. It was the same one which her customers would stand upon to try out dresses, in the center of three mirrors so that they could see every angle. And it was the perfect height to align her with Spike’s raging drakehood.
Coincidence?
“Holy Luna, Spike… did you knot her?” Sweetie asked, closing the door behind her.
: "You are just jealous, darling."
I love stories involving these three having fun together. Good work!
Rarity turned the tape sideways, wrapping it around the dragon’s cockhead. “Six inches around… oh my...” ... She slid the wrapped measuring tape down the dragon’s cock, the tape slipping over the ridges bit by bit, the clear liquid drenching the tape as it slid all the way down to Spike’s fat base, squeezing and clenching with her magic as she went. “Ah… seven inches around here…”
6 inches around means about 1.9 inches in diameter and 7 is 2.2 respectively. That is, for perfect circle. Otherwise it would be more along certain axis. For science!
Damn, CitC, you're on a ROLL lately. That Apogee collab was fantastic enough, but this one hits my 'favorite paring' button too! And based off that wonderful TJP art? Instant read, instant favorite.
One criticism:
Seems like there's anywhere from half a sentence to half a paragraph missing here. Lost in editing maybe?
Otherwise I can't complain about this at all. Bravo, man, I'd love to see more Sparity from you.
--CG
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Thanks! it was just part of a sentence, luckily, have tuned it up. Glad you enjoyed it!
This was hot.
I formally request more on behalf of your readers.
This was great i really hope to see a follow up or another Sparity story from you in the near future
End of story. Spike burst and Sweetie never talks to Rares again.
When did Sweetie say the Full experience did she mean that Spike had "Two" instead of "one"? or she meant another thing?
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Got to the fic,
started reading,
"Hmm that's really nice writing"
Like and Fav on the first chapter
Then notice in the comment section WHO is purple ^^;;;
That was hot!
Threesomes, especially those involving F/F incest (taboo factor without the risk of inbreeding), are especially arousing, I find.
'Who' doesn't matter; 'what' does, and you're now Spike's. He's claimed you, as is his right as predator compared to your prey.
Getting two fucktoys, who love both each other and you? Nah.
That was amazing! I can imagine doing that with one of my teachers I that I have a crush!!! XD😍
Ahegao face FTW!
I can see this going a lot farther than just what is current. Sweetie DOMINATING her big sister while Spike is obeying Sweetie's every command?! THAT would make a great extension to this fic!
By Lunas blue butt That was awwwesome
: "I assure you: She can't. No mare can."
I approve.
Coincidence?
: "You are just jealous, darling."
I love stories involving these three having fun together.
Good work!
6 inches around means about 1.9 inches in diameter and 7 is 2.2 respectively. That is, for perfect circle. Otherwise it would be more along certain axis. For science!