When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade, right? WRONG!
Ok, yeah second chance at life nice, not so nice; I now live with pastel colored ponies. yep, life is just great.
I might have been ok with this, but I wasn't for these reasons.
1: Everyone was a horse!
2: They only ate vegetables!
3: I got a mom, I mean I really didn't need a mom, especially a pastel pony mom!
4: Everyone thought I was sort of a freak! I'm the human, that's normal! They were talking horses with magic, that's messed up!
5: I went from an adult, to a frickin' kid!
But, hey, at least I'm alive right?
Rated Teen just to be safe and because there is mild swearing.
Chapters (6)
Wait, so the main character didn't get turned into a pony?
Sounds interesting I hope to see this great story evolve I really like where you’ve gone so far.
This is a nice twist on a old formula
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That is true but as long as said human doesn't gain any powers, turn into a pony, or become friends with everything and is always polite to the point of bs then I'm good
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I was not aware my bad
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Yeah it can suck
This is an interesting Story. Looking Forward to seeing more.
Well i stay and keep reading, interesting story btw!
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Nope, still a human, just instead of 21, she's now 5
If you are confused as to weather or not hippogriffs eat meat just look at the beak. A thin hooked beak often means that yes they eat meat where as a thick straight beak means they eat more nuts and insects.
Diamond's going to see Rarity
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Well I wasn't confused, but the show hasn't proved any rock solid evidence that they eat meat or not, but it does make for quite the interesting twist does it not?
Which nation will be chosen to prepare food for this human thrown into a world of ponies?
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Yes, yes she is.
Pro tip, never run made-up words like 'heartsong' by translation sites.
'Hört auf' means literary 'Listen to...', or by context 'Obey...' or 'Stop it!'
Heartsong is a compound word of Heart=Herz and Song=Lied also Herzlied, but that sounds stupid.
Instead use Herzenslied meaning 'Heart's Song'.
Second, 'Crystal Cadenza Jewel' correctly translated is 'Kristall Kadenz Juwel' but Kristall has a masculin pronoun here in germany, so maybe not a good name for a woman. (I guess the lightly strange naming of some OCs hints to a connection to Equestria in the past, but still.)
Lastly, what's Siberian Latin? In Siberia they speak russian, a slavic language. Latin is the basis of todays romance languages like french or spanish.
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I feel like ambassadors will be sent for this unusual request
Wow good strong start i look forward to your next chapter. Also please keep translating what Diamant say when she speaks german it'll help fools like me understand what she says in your author's note. It obvious who Luna is going to see. One more thing you're very clever when you first introduced Ada i had no idea you were talking about the siren Adagio Dazzle or some form of her. Now that i re-read this chapter you were pretty obvious. Nevertheless still pretty clever. You have some way to introduce the other 2 sirens in some form even as off hand mentions or developing Diamant more? In fun and clever ways. Either/or great start.
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Well, that's what google said, I'm only 15 here and don't know that many languages, like only basic Spanish and a little French and mandarin, but that's just from tv and movies.
I'm glad you know proper translations of it now and I feel a little like a fool now...
Thanks for the comment!
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Glad you like it, and this is kind of a fun way to learn new languages am I right?
And Diamant is just an Equestria girl Oc but in the human realm, I might do a story later on about her and Adagio
And yes, as the story goes on, you will learn more about Diamant as she begins to trust the ponies more.
And maybe, but Ada/ Adagio never really introduces Diamant to her sisters/bandmates, she only knows them briefly.
This is funny, keep it up
Man I'm not sure if I should feel bad for laughing or laugh harder that she is still acting like the adult she no longer is
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Maybe a bit of both?
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YOUR WELCOME!
Well I hope she gets a chance to say good bye to her true love
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Wow i look forward to that. And secondly yay, i was hoping for a vague mention of the other two sirens aswesome. i still look forward to Diamant's adventure i'm hoping she will feel safe with the ponies in time. Also i love the naming convention here when introducing Ariana (Aria Blaze) and Sonia (Sonata Dusk) Also just so you know my EQG Waifu is Sonata Dusk. I find her Airheadness adorably cute. I feel she isn't as ditzy as she acts.
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Well, glad you did. Adagio has to be my EG waifu if I had to pick one.
And I don't think Sonata is as airheaded as she seems either, I mean she's lived HOWlong?! She can't be that dumb, for all we know, she's a mastermind but hides her true power because Adagio most likely wouldn't be happy if the runt of the bunch was the mastermind instead of her.
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I agree but both Adagio and Aria should be aware of the old adage "it's always the quiet ones you least expect" I look forward to your next chapter
Dargon
But this was a nice chapter tho I could of done without pictures as the felt unnecessary if that makes sense
If each can only excel in two areas, take two, and rotate their shared dish.
Dragon and Hippogriff, and alternate the one that cooks lunch.
My vote is the combo of the hippogriff and the griffon. Also did you draw those pictures of Celestia and Luna if so i'd like to comission you to draw my O.C pegasus Twisted Dreams. I look forward to your next chapter and who Diamant picks as her chef
Go for the combo.
I don't see a need to fire anybody, Each of them has a weak spot. Keep them out of the kitchen when prep is happening for that meal. Looks like the dragon will be sleeping in every day. The griffon and the hippogriff will need to alternate who does breakfast.
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No, I didn't draw those pictures, I'm ok, but I'm not that good
But If my PainttoolSAI worked I might be better But, since it don't work anymore my drawings are kinda sucky. But hey, maybe I could try it.
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Sorry the pictures were confusing for you, I just wanted to add visual affect.
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They didn't confuse me but they felt out of place because to me at least diamond suddenly has a notebook pencils and coloring materials at breakfast
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No, she got them after breakfast was over. It was to give her something to do while she waited.
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see that confused me because I don't believe that it was stated that she had someone bring the matirials to her
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True I didn't state that.
I've had fam sick the past few days so I've been helping out more, so my mind wasn't as focused as it should have been. Sorry about that.
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I hope your fam gets better
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Well, we're almost there, but just to forewarn everyone.
I live on a farm, and it's going into lambing season, so I will be really busy. No bum lambs yet, but it most likely will happen, so my writing will not happen as much
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that is fine I know the farm life. I used to raise chickens and cows before I moved so I completely understand
Listen, as a native of Germany I would request that you stop to butcher my language.
Google translate is a tool to make foreign language understandable for you, NOT to translate your language in a foreign one.
Stupid Fucking bed head = Dummer Fickkopf? WRONG!!!
Stupid = (see below)
Fucking = verflucht, verdammt, verfickt, scheiß-, ...
bed head doesn't have a german translation. Best term would be 'ein Fitz' like a tangle.
Dummkopf is a noun. Correct would be 'dummes' or 'bescheuertes'. All of them can be translated as stupid.
What the fuck: a phrase; never and I mean never translate phrases literally.
Now after my "little" vent, first, I do respect that you write and hop to keep going as long as possible.
But if you want to use a foreign language, than you should either be a bit fluent in it, or put up the effort to use it correctly.
And if you not, and if (like it seems in this story) the associated nationality isn't of real importants to the plot, than you should reconsider to use it entirely. Till now all it does is hurt your story, that otherwise is written quite nicely.
PS.: You still haven't corrected the errors in your former chapters.
And if you have to, use this for phrases and such.
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sorry about that,
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I'd love if you could try everyone has to start somewhere right
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Dang it, you're here too?
All for there good foods
Will this be continued out of curiosity?
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I would like to inform you that as a junior in high school I am taking German. Es tut mier leid (I'm also sorry if I spelt that wrong I'm still learning but I know it means I'm sorry and I honestly am)
If I offended you in any way shape or form.
While I don't plan on removing what German is already in the story I do however promise to stop using it in further chapters.
Thank you for your criticism.
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I hope to update this soon.
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What's the say they weren't the ones who coined the phrase when Sonata showed her true prowess