This story is a sequel to Too Many Marefriends (And wives)
Still wanting to forget what happened when Discord put Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Starlight Glimmer under a spell to "teach" him that he doesn't need a girlfriend to be happy, Eric Reed asks Starlight to cast a spell to make him forget it happened.
Not what he learned from it, but what he went through to learn it.
In a not-so-surprising manner, the spell goes wrong.
Not only did Eric not forget anything, but now he'll have to avoid the affections of just about every mare in Ponyville, and beyond! Even one that usually lives far away from Ponyville may want in on the action...
Like this story's predecessor "Too Many Marefriends (And wives)" this story takes place after the events of my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story, which I'll have the link for below. It's not mandatory to read it to understand or enjoy this story, but it would help you understand more of who the OC human character Eric Reed is. It is also not mandatory to read this story's predecessor, which is a one-shot, although it would give a little more context as to why the plot in this story is like it is.
And no, not that plot.
http://www.fimfiction.net./story/427481/a-giant-adventure-to-equestria
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xDD want to see the confusion roll
it will also affect
candence, celestia and the others ??
crysalis too?
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I would say, but you know how Rarity is about Spoilers, so...NO SPOILERS!!
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I will say that's it's gonna be a lot more chaotic. This is just a taste of what's to come.
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
all this chaos only strengthens more and more discord and screwball
by the way, did the cmc, screwball, diamond tiara, and silver spoon do that?
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Do what? you mean are they the reason the spell went wrong, or will they be hitting on Eric too?
If you mean the former: It's not their fault, Starlight just goofed up the spell.
If you mean the latter, than no, they won't be doing it.
Ah yes, liked
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the second
well, and you said that every mare would dress like her boyfriend and be super advanced
unless they are traps
I would find it difficult to flee from them too.
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correction
I would think Hilario was fleeing from them too
Cleary Spike must have amnesia, because Twilight has a way longer history of screwing up with spells and relying on magic. And it still goes on to this day.
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True, Twilight does. But Spike didn't say she doesn't though, since he didn't even bring her up.
rsrsrs
but even so, I still wanted to see cutie mark's reaction
cutie brands, dating and romance yay?!
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Well, the CMC might not be getting into the act, but I think you may enjoy the last chapter. I'm going all-out for it, and it's almost ready.
Well, for a "T" rated story, anyway.
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uray !
xDD very good
the bacon pony made its appearance
Well the chapter was ilario ... it would be funnier if shinning armor appears kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Hm. Still semi amusing.
Good job.
Ho ho ho! An incredibly amusing journey!
At that? I would've probably gone with it. At least she's got a decent sense of humour - I'll take it.
Eric better remember to bring Angel gift later, or he really will be in Tartarus!
Oh Lawd! At least he got out of Ponyville before a repeat of Smarty Pants happened
Yes I just compared Princess Cadance to Jaba the Hutt.
I know he was too embarrassed to, but he could've told Sunset "but if you still want to be my girlfriend, we can go back through the portal together!"
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Eric might have liked that, but the Nightmare Prevention Spell's magic trapped in him actually blocks him from passing through the portal, which I didn't go into in this story.
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Ohhhh my heart breaks for him!
WHY I OUGHTA!!!
Now i'm literally fucking impressed at the main story and the Sequel here.
THIS IS LITERALLY LIKE MARES IN HEAT AHAHAHAHA!!!
But seriously you should've sped up the aggresiveness a mega notch to make more comedy and randomness to make both stories absolutely over-the-top.....uhhh is there a word that is higher that describes something like 999x times more brutal, insane,sick,crazy,mad,destructable and more etc. than what i got so far? BECAUSE THIS WOULD BE PERFECTION BY THEN!!!
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"Fun+:, because that's what I think this story would be if I did turn what happened up a notch...although Eric would have another word for it
But even at the level this story did take the mares at, glad you enjoyed the story and its predecessor!
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obviously depends on the timestamp when it's gonna happen becuz u got, twilight as a princess, starlight,sunburst....uhhhh idfk when this event would take place lol if it does even have a timestamp. OH YEAH i just read fanfiction through the night till 5am and my parents are about to get up soon. F lul^^ wanna do a 1on1 chat aside of here? i'm down to do Private messages and well...i do love me some who are crazy becuz i am.
I was searching through my favorites with 2 filters for which one is marked as teen and then i found the prequel, my friend told me he read them already but doesnt remember alot anymore. However i would like to see another sequel but absolute world apocalypse where eric is hunted by absolutely all of them. Like a regular heat season hunt
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That would be very difficult to set up, since I had more or less stated in a future story with Eric that mares (at least in the continuity with Eric) don't go into heat at the same time of year. A spell being a catalyst for the mayhem, like one was for this story, could theoretically do the trick, but as for right now I don't have any ideas to pull that off that wouldn't feel too forced to set up. Twilight (and sometimes Starlight) are the ponies of choice for most writers to have screw up a spell, but after what Starlight and Eric went through in this story, they wouldn't cast spells that have any chance of repeating what happened here
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We can. I don't spend as much time on the site as I used to, but we could send some PMs the times I do be on.
Ngl having read the Eric dates Sunset fic I would have just laughed if Eric was fine with Sunset kissing him.
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Funny thing is, as Eric himself said in narration, if Sunset was in her human form, he would have not minded it if she wanted to give him a kiss in this story, though he still would have drawn the line at getting "Sunshimed"
Safe to say he went on to get over his little inmate aversion of kissing a female of a different species on her lips.