this is an start of something beautiful i just hope you update this regularly seen lots of stories start off good then the writer losses focus.... you have my attention ( both of them )
Interesting less "Do as I say slave" more "I'm in charge but I'm going to guide and teach you along the way" I can get behind this as long as crazy shit don't start happening.
9427888 I just read your other comment that said the same thing on another story. If you're trying to be a joker for lulz, everyone is missing the joke, which might mean you need to rethink the joke.
9427923 maybe, I tend to stick to the non-clopping side of fimfiction for the most part, so meh, horse on horse sex isn't really something I read about unless they've gone anthro. I'm talking Celestia being in charge of the relationship but guiding First Prize through his sexual awakening with kindness yet a bit of authority. A female dom story where the woman isn't debasing the male insulting, beating, enslaving the male and otherwise treating him like trash. I don't like that in sub/dom relationship stories even male dom or if mind control is involved. It destroys the very nature of the relationship and what it's supposed to represent. These kinds of relationships at their core are about trust, and even though the dom is doing all of the ordering, the sub is the one truly in charge b/c the sub dictates the pace, roughness, and kind of treatment the dom is allowed to give. It's the dom's job to ensure that the sub follows orders while at the same time making sure the sub knows they are safe. When the sub says to stop the dom stops end of story. Any dom who continues after the sub has expressed a desire to end the session shouldn't be leading this kind of lifestyle.
9428297 I felt like a supernaturally impetus would interfere with the more human (equine?) motivation that Celestia is simply lonely.
Also an emphasis on the premise isn't particularly important. The Tree of Harmony demanding he marry Celestia is just as ridiculous as the Celestia wanting a partner and using a magic spell to find one.
When the sub says to stop the dom stops end of story. Any dom who continues after the sub has expressed a desire to end the session shouldn't be leading this kind of lifestyle.
Yeah, sounds like Moonstone. Luna and Fleur's relationship is founded on exploring an equitable dom-sub relationship, where the dom only goes as far as the sub is willing to be pushed. At one point there's a very stark comparison made between Luna and Fleur's healthy relationship versus another couple's very one-sided and unhealthy relationship.
Thing's aren't always peachy-keen, but the story is generally positive.
9429180 Cool, still though those kinds of dom/sub relationship as far as I know are par for the course. Doms push subs to test their limits and possibly go further. In the end though the sub has final say. Those relationships rely so much on trust and loyalty though the trust also comes from if they choose to explore bondage which is another level of trust completely, if couple can work out a healthy sub/dom relationship you have my respect. It's sad that society raises their noses at such relationships b/c people can benefit so much from them. Granted the opposite is also true such relationships can be extremely damaging both mentally and physically if handled without care.
First Prize makes the sun rise.
this is an start of something beautiful i just hope you update this regularly seen lots of stories start off good then the writer losses focus.... you have my attention ( both of them )
Interesting less "Do as I say slave" more "I'm in charge but I'm going to guide and teach you along the way" I can get behind this as long as crazy shit don't start happening.
9427571
So, like Moonstone? (Luna/Fleur dom/sub relationship exploration, if you didn't know)
9427888
If this is garbage. I'm happy to be a trash collector.
Though... what, in your mind, would not constitute a "trash" label? Seriously, I'm curious.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Aw.
I wanted to see that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
9427888
I just read your other comment that said the same thing on another story. If you're trying to be a joker for lulz, everyone is missing the joke, which might mean you need to rethink the joke.
9428122
It low-tier bait. Ignore him. Anyone who posts about Alex Jones on FimFic isn't worth anyone's time.
9428157
Oh is that what he posted? How... cute.
Oh, before I forget, nice fic so far! Looking forward to where you go with it.
Like the guy above me, I'm getting "Moonstone" vibes from this and that is so not a bad thing!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Should be hoof But other than that good story.
9427923
maybe, I tend to stick to the non-clopping side of fimfiction for the most part, so meh, horse on horse sex isn't really something I read about unless they've gone anthro. I'm talking Celestia being in charge of the relationship but guiding First Prize through his sexual awakening with kindness yet a bit of authority. A female dom story where the woman isn't debasing the male insulting, beating, enslaving the male and otherwise treating him like trash. I don't like that in sub/dom relationship stories even male dom or if mind control is involved. It destroys the very nature of the relationship and what it's supposed to represent. These kinds of relationships at their core are about trust, and even though the dom is doing all of the ordering, the sub is the one truly in charge b/c the sub dictates the pace, roughness, and kind of treatment the dom is allowed to give. It's the dom's job to ensure that the sub follows orders while at the same time making sure the sub knows they are safe. When the sub says to stop the dom stops end of story. Any dom who continues after the sub has expressed a desire to end the session shouldn't be leading this kind of lifestyle.
9428297
I felt like a supernaturally impetus would interfere with the more human (equine?) motivation that Celestia is simply lonely.
Also an emphasis on the premise isn't particularly important. The Tree of Harmony demanding he marry Celestia is just as ridiculous as the Celestia wanting a partner and using a magic spell to find one.
9428157
Oh that guy goes on lots of stories to post stupid and pointless things. Definitely not my first time encountering him.
Loved this so far, more please!
Question, does Celestia smoking in the cover art mean she does so in the story?
9429122
Nope!
9428471
Yeah, sounds like Moonstone. Luna and Fleur's relationship is founded on exploring an equitable dom-sub relationship, where the dom only goes as far as the sub is willing to be pushed. At one point there's a very stark comparison made between Luna and Fleur's healthy relationship versus another couple's very one-sided and unhealthy relationship.
Thing's aren't always peachy-keen, but the story is generally positive.
9429180
Cool, still though those kinds of dom/sub relationship as far as I know are par for the course. Doms push subs to test their limits and possibly go further. In the end though the sub has final say. Those relationships rely so much on trust and loyalty though the trust also comes from if they choose to explore bondage which is another level of trust completely, if couple can work out a healthy sub/dom relationship you have my respect. It's sad that society raises their noses at such relationships b/c people can benefit so much from them. Granted the opposite is also true such relationships can be extremely damaging both mentally and physically if handled without care.
9429813
Ponies use a different measurement system, don't worry. 15 feet square is plenty of space in their measurement system.
That was great
Liking it so far, keep up the good work Arc!