It has been nearly two hundred years since the megaspells rained fire down on the world, reducing it to a tainted wasteland. And ever since that day, the changelings have never been sighted in the wasteland...
Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
The entire course of history can be changed by a single butterfly flapping its wings. So what if an entire war was won instead of lost? What if a King never existed?
Forced to leave her peaceful hometown and flee for her life alongside a mysterious orphan filly named Primrose, New Equestrian war-veteran Scarlet Frost will have to use every resource at her disposal just to stay alive.
Good Chapter. Id like to see how Amber deals with Feathers husband. Also your transitions are a bit too quick. I recommend just bit more descriptive with each character For Example i think Feather husband could introduce like this Walking through door to her sisters home Amber felt a shiver from her friend. Feather used to cold of this once happy home sees the cause of all her sadness. There sitting on the couch once a proud Buck with high paying job in the Canterlot police department he was demoted when he got jealous of a new rookie.Oak was his name He was build like big mac and his antlers made the most proud unicorns jealous. His body still tight with muscle for chase criminals. his Hazel eyes looked down on Feather with shame but a bit of anger. Or something like that.
Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
Yes. I have two lined up where silver dominates.
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Good Chapter. Id like to see how Amber deals with Feathers husband. Also your transitions are a bit too quick. I recommend just bit more descriptive with each character For Example i think Feather husband could introduce like this Walking through door to her sisters home Amber felt a shiver from her friend. Feather used to cold of this once happy home sees the cause of all her sadness. There sitting on the couch once a proud Buck with high paying job in the Canterlot police department he was demoted when he got jealous of a new rookie.Oak was his name He was build like big mac and his antlers made the most proud unicorns jealous. His body still tight with muscle for chase criminals. his Hazel eyes looked down on Feather with shame but a bit of anger. Or something like that.