Discord, Princess Cozy Glow's personal student, goes to the city of Ponyville to prepare for the Summer Sun Celebration. He was not prepared to go after ancient artifacts with a group of friends and defeat an ancient evil. This is only the beginning, isn't it? Good thing Opalescence, the dragon he hatched, is always good company.
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I just love the concept and description already
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Thank you.
I'm just working on getting ideas out of my head and have two other stories I'm working on.
Good thing I don't have to go back to my job until the sixth.
I saw it and said wth, then got to thinking this is actually something I've been waiting to see. An alternate universe with the sense of Discord as an Element, this should great.
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Well, if things go according to the (very minimal) plan I have it will at least be decent.
I don't know about great, but it would be wonderful if it does become great
This honestly seems like the sort of thing someone would come up with while smoking something. But that’s not necessarily a bad thing.
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Naw, you should just never leave me alone to think for hours on end.
My mind goes to some insane places.
At least there entertaining to me.
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Yeah I would probably be the same way if I wasn’t on hyperactivity medication. But I’m still close even with it.
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Well I hope you'er enjoying it.
I'm working on the third chapter now
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I have faith, that's really all we have these days.
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That... is very true.
Thank you for having faith in the story.
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No problem!
Pegasi don't have head feathers. I have no idea where you got that idea.
Ok, WHY does she have a lion's tail?
I thought he was a pony? Pony hooves aren't cloven.
Are you talking about her mane and tail, or her actual wing feathers? Because the first option isn't feathered.
Aside from what I'm assuming is unintentional ignorance of anatomy and too many spelling mistakes to make naming them worth it, not bad. Tracking.
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These alternate universe ponies are different than the cannon ones.
Unicorns have
cloven hoovesand slightly curved horns, but are other wise the sameEdit: Discord will be explained later.
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Earth ponies have lion like tails in order to mark them as magical creatures, their tails are about the same length as a lion tail but half way down the tail they are covered in more pony like hair
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Pegasi have no mane or hairy pony tails, instead they have feathers along there head, wings, back, and tail feathers that react to there natural magic in order to shift them from being like a normal pony tail to being more like bird tail feathers and are the colors that the mane and tail would normally be. As well as having larger wings in order to mach their size.
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Those feel like changes that should have been explained in story, but that might just be me.
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Honestly, I just couldn't think of a way to explain it in story with out breaking the flow.
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And the spelling mistakes are one of the reasons I'm writing any thing at all so as to get better at it and have less mistakes in the future.
All in all, I thank you for the feed back, it helps me improve and get better.
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No problem. Thanks for clearing up my confusion! Looking forward to more, this is certainly a...unique idea.
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Yeah, I had the idea a couple months ago and hadn't seen anything like it.
So after much deliberation I finally said f**k it and started writing.
OK, I don't know what the fuck this is, but the concept sounds awesome. I'll read this as soon as I can!
After reading this chapter, I saw some small spelling errors (probably typos):
I think it's supposed to be "of course"
It's probably "does", but it may also be a verb I'm not aware of
Are you sure it isn't "he has"?
Although these small errors are scattered here and there, they are very few and in no way hinder the story in a whole. I hope you can fix these problems, as the concept sounds very interesting.
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Thank you for pointing those out for me.
I'll try to fix them when i'm motivated to write again.
The description on it's own blew my mind.
Doesn't this story have a sequel?
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No, not yet at least. Just a lack of updates do to lack of motivation.
I really like this story
it isn't crap! It's well done and completely original! The only things I've could really nitpick about it is the occasional misspelt word and that's not really a problem.
I'm looking forward to when you regain the motivation to continue this great story!
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Life be crazy, but I will hopefully get back to this at some point.